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| Rae Maxwell 2007-10-09 ch 14, anon. | abuseFirst few paragraphs, i was saying to myself 'this had better not be from the POV of a very badly written mac" since i had somehow forgotten what the title of this story was. As soon as i found out who it was, i grinned, because thats who i had been gunning for. Good job! You managed to wrap up a very coherent episode case as a frame for your pairing, and make it believable. |
| BlackIceNinja 2007-03-26 ch 14,  | abuseThat's cute. I liked the fact that you actually created a case for them, I read a lot of these, and the fact that they have jobs is almost ignored, so kudos. I liked it |
| Philomena Kuroi 2006-07-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseAI! This is hilarious! I LOVE FLACK'S THOUGHTS!1 |
| RachelRiott 2006-06-19 ch 11, | abuseUmm ... about my review to chapter five. I went back fifty entries and finally found it. And boy, was it worth it. Extremely well written, just what I needed. |
| RachelRiott 2006-06-19 ch 5, | abuseI couldn't find it!! I need some smut and the lack of boy sexyness makes me sad. |
| RachelRiott 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely adorable inner monologue, you have to love the simple way men think. On another note, his ** really is just perfect. |
| Sara 2006-04-08 ch 3, anon. | abuse"I feel as if I'm in one of those bad fanfiction stories that teenage girls who don't have a life write. Not that I could really say much in the whole having-a-life department..." Oh man, I cracked up when I read that. So true... but this story is NOT "bad fanfiction"... I really enjoy your writing and this story is totally rockin'!! |
| Elizabeta Draculea 2006-03-03 ch 14, | abuseI really love it that story! Wow! This so cute and soft... and lovely! Another chapter when? ^_^ |
| mizukimarr910 2005-11-19 ch 14, | abuseaw you soo get the biggest review just because i love this story soo ** much. and i am completely in love with all your other stories. i hope you've got more where this is coming from because i would hate to put you on my author alert and then not get any (yes i know how that sounds) for months to come so please keep writing and update again soon. thanx mizukimarr910 |
| Black Sorceress 2005-11-19 ch 14, | abuseThi is the end, right? Anyway, it was a really good fic, I really enjoyed it. Hope you write more. |
| Sara Fergeson 2005-09-06 ch 14, anon. | abuseThe story part of this is good, the whole thing would have been tons better with out all the ** tho. A story doesn't have to have s e x to get someones attention. Sure doesn't get mine. Contrary to popular belief, there are people out there that don't like ** in their fics. |
| dopeyidiot 2005-08-31 ch 14, | abusenow this is good Of course Danny can offer Flack a different type of comfort I loved the way this has unfolded and all because Flack spoke his mind. Loved the way Danny was such a tease but the love they feel for one another is clear wicked |
| Sarcastic Realist 2005-08-29 ch 2, | abuseLOL. I love the last sentence. Man, ur funny. |
| RiseAgainPhoenix 2005-08-04 ch 9, | abuseI love the way you've written Mac. Even though he hasn't appeared much, you've still managed to capture his constant weariness, how he makes it seem like he's putting up with more than he should. It's hilarious, the way all of your characters interact. Go you! |
| RiseAgainPhoenix 2005-08-04 ch 6, | abuseThis is good. This is cute. But I just can't help thinking, "Uh, guys? This is SO not what Mac sent you guys out for..." |