THAT WAS SO SWEETT!

I love these sort of fics! *hugs fic*

Wow! That was really great! You managed to keep both Yoh and Hao in character. I loved this story! Great job!

Angsty but cute! Keep i up!

That's so...sad. You write really well. I wish there was more.

heh cool

You know,what I love about yourpostingsare that you are able to convey the gist of your meanings without resorting to long and overly drawn out chapter fics. This one is definitely no exception. The interaction of the two Shamans, as well as the (well done) Hao first person perspective make this story one of my new favorites! Bravo!

This is interesting.. I like it

update when u can

:nodnod: I think you did it right. But maybe you could have played a bit more with the title o_o Like say how the horizon is like Hao and Yoh (that is why you chose the title, right?)

But anyways, it was very good Great job )

you made good word choices, it contributes to a certain tone. Definitely a good start!