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| Seoul 2007-01-24 ch 1,  | abuselove it... |
| mostar 2006-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this fic!! Don was so sweet, Danny was so cute. Keep up the great work please... |
| Hana_Chan 2006-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, that was really sweet. You really got their characters pegged. I just recently noticed that Danny DOES talk to himself! |
| Dr FooFoo 2005-07-17 ch 1, | abuse*wibbles* I read this at MesserandFlack and already told you how happy in my pants it makes me. But I'm telling you again because you're teh hot. :P |
| IvoryRaven2 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseHee, favourite lines: "Danny's lips, still slightly swollen from the harsh, hard kisses they shared, are slightly parted, and he's drooling a little on Don's chest. It's kind of gross, but Don doesn't want to move him." It's not many stories (let alone romance ones) that mention these little, completely kind of details. Another nice thing was that you didn't say definitively whether or not Danny's tattoo was a Tanglewood one. Also, if you're looking to get more reviews, you might want to make it so that you can accept anomynous reviews (look around in the user settings). It can lead to flames, but it can also encourage unregistered people (or lazy people) to review. Of course, completely your choice. |