Man I love your short pieces!

God that was lovely, the comparison an contrast between shinobi and fireflies and Kakashi and pervertedness and Iruka is ALL tied together sweetly and summed up. I love this...

Funny and beautiful. How did the shortest fic I've ever read become one of my favorites?? Odd, I think you broke my brain. (: Or at least altered my perseption of drabbles and such.

Thanks for the read.

..."“…but you still think fireflies are silly?”

“Well… their asses light up. That’s one thing shinobi have over fireflies… unless you’re counting Gai’s spandex’d one...” Kakashi pauses. “Though I am impressed by the thought of spending your entire lifespan trying to get laid. It’s a noble goal.”

“You don’t have a romantic bone in your body, do you?” Iruka comments lightly.

“Come over here and say that.”

And because Iruka knows a lot of things, he does.

It’s a beautiful night, after all."

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Wow. I will never look at another firefly again without thinking of Gai. Well done! XD

short, humourous and sweet! i love the line "...their asses light up..." it concludes very nicely.

Aw...how cute!
I love your Kakashi/Iruka stories!
They're always in character and interact so well!

"'Well... their asses light up...'"
I'm gonna say that practically makes the fic...but I like the metaphors

This is so cute. ^^ I love the reference to Gai's spandex. XD Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97

wahh... your fic is the perfect example that good fiction need not be a as long as a novel. n_n a gem! One of the best I've read!

perfect characterization of both. beautiful, funny, sweet. *favs it*

KAWAII!!

It was so serious until 'their asses light up'. That cracked me up. Nice thoughtful!Kakashi there haha very god ^_^ 'Noble goal' my **!

eheh. Speaking of noble goals... *off to post another Kakairu ficcie...*

*loves* So very sweet and simple (the theme not the drabble, it take skill to make so few words have such an imapact ^_^) - it's nice to see a short little moment like that, that's peaceful without neglecting the fact that they're killers. What gorgeous is, you made that fact add to the romance ^__^

So cute T_T ! Cute cute cute ! *kawaii crisis* I really like it !

wow this story is hilarious! it was so funny! Really a great job!