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Yukikitsun-chan12
2008-01-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseLoved it are you going to make a seequl
or how ever its spelled. Please do
suriru
2006-07-08
ch 1,
abuseomfg AtoFujiRyo = Power Trio

>DD!! Awesome fic.
Unreal Phantom
2006-01-23
ch 1,
abuseOHMIGOSH! THis story has brought me into the world of AtoRyo! I am forever a loyal supporter! O_O
Lady Androgene
2005-07-14
ch 1,
abuseI was supposed to review this way way back but the damn class bell rang and my next class is on the other side of the university.

Anyway, I *squee* you for writing AtoRyo. One of the pairings that could rival my love for TezuRyo.

Fuji's evil, but I love him for his treachery. And I'm not even a Fuji fan to begin with. And Ryoma... oh, I love him when he's all sulky. Atobe's... ah, words can't really say how much love I have for Ore-sama.

Love this. Write more!
kasugai gummie
2005-07-04
ch 1,
abuseI ADORE. The "morning after" Ryoma, the looking-into-his-investments Atobe, the entrepeneurial Fuji... Love, woman. Love.

“Oh yes, your sempai was rather generous. Two days for fifty thousand yen is quite the investment. Ore-sama regrets not taking the ‘week for a 100 grand’ deal. A pity.”

I laugh and have no pity for Ryoma because AtoRyo is just snarky like that and therefore he needs no pity. Wonderful job!
ennov
2005-07-01
ch 1,
abuseHey this is soo nice and funny haha i cant believe that ryoma got sold off by fuji and fifty thousand for two days haha this is real nice ad new hehe keep up the good work and upload it soon...>_
ryofan
2005-07-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseCute story, more please! I _so_ love AtoRyo!
RuByMoOn17
2005-07-01
ch 1,
abusekawaii! more pls!
Craze Izumi
2005-07-01
ch 1,
abusePoor Ryoma being "Sold" by his senpai...
Little Blossom
2005-06-30
ch 1,
abuseATobe/Ryoma *bounces* It's the pairing I love but never find ^_^
DnKS-giRLs
2005-06-30
ch 1,
abuse*blink*
*...loading teh informations...*

OH My God...

*laugh*
*die*

So damned lovely... and scary at the same time ^ ^() Fuji is such a businessman, ne? We rather feel sorry toward Ryoma, not because he has to accompany Atobe (heck, who'll be sorry about that?!) but because he has to see those pink curtains, purple bed sheets and lavender carpet...:D
Haninozuka Mitsukuni
2005-06-30
ch 1,
abusehahaha...that was really cool ^^*
Poor little Ryoma...stuck with the Monkey King ^0^ and Fuji getting rich thanks Ryoma o_OU It was really good!
I love AtoRyo! Write more please~ haha
I will probably review all the AtoRyo fanfics ^^;;
hehe
echizenryo
2005-06-30
ch 1,
abuseahaha. nice. well, i know the frilly pink-ness of atobe's room would send me fleeing for the hills as well. poor ryoma...evil fuji! love your characterizations of ryoma and atobe here, and your descriptions of ryoma slowly waking up are excellent and hilarious. great work.
unknown person or persons
2005-06-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseah(dies)

pardon that moement it was an extreme fangirl moment. That was really good, i love ryoma + anybody that isn't momo. It was well written and i really like who describe the way ryoma thinks.
Ryuuza
2005-06-30
ch 1,
abuseOhmygod. I think you just killed me. XDXD But it was so darned cute I couldn't help. AtoRyo is msnarkyyum even though we all know my OTP. Heh, and my AtoMo fondness. But it was really cute and well written and I squee Fuji's mercenary tendecies. Hee. He's such a businessman. Lovely!
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