Your next move, Link, is to plant your little Hero's butt next to that door and not move it until she opens it.

lol, awesome story! C=

this story is great!
Please update soon.

come on
pls keep going
one of the best stories i ever read
and your twilight princess one too

Wow.. Zelda's gone, now Navi? Well, atleast Link has Malon... RIGHT?! RIGHT?! -Hides in fear of what might happen.-

Well.. I hope it's a happy ending soon! >.< You should make it so that it's not ALL bad.. Like, I know Link has Malon, but you should add in more romance scenes for them. Link could use a little lovin' about now. Lol. xD And by a little, I mean alot. xD Lol

Wow, Zelda is a **! xD I hate girls like that. To tell the truth, I can't see Link with anyone BUT Malon.. And when I read storys about him and Zelda, I am like "Ugh.. Give me a break. >/" xD Well, it might be interesting if you maybe added something about Zelda being all cutesie to Link, as in trying to win him over. It might add a little more conflict, and..

Wow.. This is the first story that I've ever read that made me tear up! I love Link and Malon together, and I feel so bad for Malon. I love the story from up to what I've read. ^^ You're really good, the story was so cute, up till now. -Cries.- But it makes me want to read more.

omg i loved it! that was amazing i cant wait for the next update!!

Awesome! Me Like!
:)

God, i LOVE this story! I can actually imagine it happening, and i can see Link and Malon actually say these things, its great *^* Please update as soon as possible!

hey, you ever going to continue this?

*cheers*

An update!

Navi's dead? Ah, man, how many times have my sister and I yelled at that fairy! Lol. She sure was annoying, but I can see where Link's coming from. She was like a sister to him.

The "strange occurrences" must include Zelda's death. I wonder if they'll come back alive aferwards (not that I'm a big fan of Zelda herself or anything).

Anyway, good story, awesome chapter...you know. Hope you get around to updating soon! :)

Yay! Navi's dead!...ehem...I mean...nice chapter. :)

just update faster!lol, good chapter! Very good actually, keep up the good work.

This is great! Keeping up the Zelda bashing! Whahaha!

This is great Clover! Go you! =)