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| Trinity Kouya Hime-sama 2007-05-17 ch 1,  | abuseGreat story idea, I can't wait for the next chapter |
| forced feelings 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseVery lovely! I look forward to future chapters! |
| Tariq 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseHi. Nice concept. What about others like Gunn, Fred & Lorne though? Will Wesley & Angel have the same great freindship? |
| Allen Pitt 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseWhy prevent Connor's birth? It's the kidnapping by Holtz & being brought up by Holtz that caused the real problems... But yeah-Wesley screwed up bigtime in Sunnydale, no question -- Faith went rogue, and Buffy quit the council... if 4th season Wes. showed up in Buffy S3... wow. I hope he realizes it's not just "knowing what's going to happen" --it's being able to deal with people better...cause as he makes changes, then events will change, and his 'knowledge advantage' will diminish... Meanwhile, as he's in Sunnydale, Fred is in Pylea...can he avoid the temptation of going to rescue her? Should he? |
| - J 2005-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm a little fuzzy still about the technicalities, but frankly, this is a SWEET concept, especially with Lilah, that was the crowning touch. I look forward to this becoming a well fleshed-out story. This first chapter is a good start. |
| Imzadi 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseSo Wes is going to try to change the past? It would be nice if he could keep Faith from going evil and prevent Connor's and therefore Jasmine's births. Maybe he could even stop Lindsey from going to Wolfram & Hart before it's too late--or at least stop him from losing his hand? I know I'd like that. |
| Indigo Spirit 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abuseVery nice I like it. |