haha you sly bastard you had me there for a sec

about half way through i was going to mouth off to you til i saw it was a dream

ill admit it you had me going

Lovely story! You write Kaname beautifully "If he did that to her, she would probably bite him." That was a p-e-r-f-e-c-t line. Totally Sagara, and a very accurate analysis of Kaname.

kudos!

Thx God it's just a dream...

Nice chapter, you've done a good job... :)

...wondering whats going on behind that door!...lol...im not a pervert...at least not that much of one!...-_-'...but i was about to scream my head off at my computer and u when i read the begging!...but it was ubber great!

that REALLY got me scared. i swear, i was like hyperventilating! if you ended it with them really breaking up, that would've been, like, sacrilige! ahh...knowing that it was only a dream, i can say that this story was very well set up and unpredictable, two qualities of a good story. keep up the good work.

Really had me going for a bit there, excellently written story, very in character all the way through. Your writing as always is execellent. Nice work.

Oh, another super good one! You had me crying when I thought that Kaname was really walking away from Sousuke; you do such an amazing job showing both characters acting so in-character. You're truly amazing!

ooKAWAII lol

ja ne

K

its good! another chapter will be great!

Eh-heh...you had me goin' there for a while. I had actually thought that it would've been the end to their relationship. , it was really great. One of the best written FMP fics I have come across.

WOW!

Men! You know how to deal with this two characters very well I thing... Another wonderful work my friend

Whoa, I was worried for a bit there! You did a great job, I hurt so badly for Sousuke! Keep Writing!

Aw, that was adorable. I think both Kaname and Sousuke were both very in character - at least once he woke up! The dream was actually believeable, although I was peeved with Kaname for thinking some other guy was better than Sousuke! Haha. Great job!

Aww that was cute. For a minute there I thought the dream was real. If it was it wouldve been heartbroken

Wow, wonderful one shot, you had me thinking that it was real up until the point where Sousuke woke up. I could almost *feel* his anxiety as Kaname dropped the "let's be friends" bomb on him...

Bravissimo, just don't scare me like that again ;)