That was hauntingly beautiful, but, it didn't make any sense to me. But then again, part of that is because my mind isn't working right now due to the stupid tests that my class is having to take during this week...

I'll say it again. I would love to visit your mind if only for one day. Not to live, just to visit.
What can I say? amazing, awkward, awful, abomination, random? A somewhat different take on Hermione that I don't like to think that would happen to her, but could see happening to her. If that makes sense?
I thought you might have been describing Herm from the start. Just "your Hermione" is one that needs to be comforted. As much as she tries to deny it she needs physical contact. She doesn't want anyone to see her weaknesses.
While the Ron aspect was jarred or fragmented. It doesn't make that much sense
All in all, a nice change from CotC but now that you've got this out of your system GET BACK TO IT! :P Much darker than your other necro story and much more enjoyable. Leaves room for my imagination to work with but still guides it to the same thing that you intended my mind to reach. Nicely done
Molle