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| swordbunny4486 2007-01-07 ch 1,  | abusevery interesting |
| Susana 2006-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeatiful, beatiful. I am GREAT admirer of the adventures of SH with Rathbone, and in this story his is seen the spirit and the presence. Congratulations. |
| HoVis 2005-10-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseA really interesting piece, but I've just one little qualm: Holmes only took drugs when there was a *lack* of cases to be solved - not when there was a mystery right in front of him. But I liked the way you described the temptation, and the reasons he turned away from it, very much. HoVis |
| Hermione Holmes 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat one shot. Actually, I think you should continue with this, as the mystery was rather intriguing, and the way you weaved in his fight with his addiction was nicely done as well. Holmes's musings on the victims allowed a good insight into the not-so-scientific part of his mind. The descriptions were very well done and the true atrocities of such crimes was felt, as well as what Holmes was going through. Can't wait for more of your stories! |
| infiniteviking 2005-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis reads beautifully, and the familiar characters canonized by Rathbone and Bruce are immediately identifiable. I'd love to see more of this. Well done! |
| AerynFire 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseAs I said before, this was a marvelous and captivating piece! I'm rather a novice here at the Rathbone stuff, as I'm not a big fan of his and Bruce's portrayals, but your piece has me wondering what's next! Also, I love how you've portrayed Holmes! His promise at the end had me going..."Man, that killer is so screwed!" and cheering. You get 'em, Holmes! ~Aeryn (of aerynfire) |