A very good, well written story and I loved the insights into the daily life of someone who's child is on the autistic spectrum. I do hope you'll contine it though, as I thought the ending was sort of abrupt. I like you style and hope you'll write more soon!

Very well written, and thank you for the insights into the day-to-day world of living with autism. It's very realistic. I hope you read this and will continue writing since your last story was written 3 years ago.

This is an excellent story--a piercing look at a rich and imperfect future. I have no experience with autistic children but Alex seemed to me very realistic, and you keep Grissom and Sara quite within character despite time and changes. The GSR shipper in me wishes for a slightly firmer resolution, but the ending definitely works with the story. A masterpiece.

Hm... Grissom is a bad boy. He really should have told Sara that he was meeting with her son and Rose. Tsk tsk. She's gonna be **, I think. Hee. Pecs -- gah! Joey used them fairly well, but how I hated them. Like Sara said -- you can't make one for everything. Good chapter. Thanks.

Wow. It was a good ending.

Lovely story.

Note: Coronation Street is not shown in the U.S., AFAIK

OMGOSH AW!
I swear my eyes are all watery to the edge of tears! oh there one goes JEEZ! OMGOSH sweetest story EVER! ee ho ok calm calm calm ccalm... ok im good but seriously WOW that was like the best!! honestly definitely one of the best i've ever read
I swear ok well i could go on but it would basically go on like this for a while so lol umm i do wish that you'd continue this but if not wel... i SUPPOSE i'd live lol bye!

Actually, I meant to say that there is no *such* train station, cause I couldn't find one that was named Grissom. But thanks for pointing out my goof :)

marek

This is actually for chapter 4, but whatever.
In your AN you said that there were no train stations or running trains in Seattle, which isn't quite true. (I lived in Seattle before I went to college) there is a train that runs through a city park called Golden Gardens, which is right on the water in Ballard (northern Seattle). And there is a train station in Issaquah, which is a city just outside of Seattle. Uh...yeah.

:-0...i was hopin there would be more to come...but all in all...it was great!

*glares evily*

Let's be friends? hmpf. Ah well, it was excellent anyways :D

YAY! What an awesome story. You've done a great job with the writing, with the ideas, and descriptions, and just everything. Way to go! Keep up the awesome work. I'll be waiting for whatever you have next!

USUALLY JUST CALL IT "MICHAEL'S NOTEBOOK" i HAVE A SON WHO USES A COMMUNICATION NOTEBOOK FROM SCHOOL. gREAT STORY - VERY REALISTIC LOOK AT THE LIFE OF A "SPECIAL" CHILD.

yay for the update, boo to the story coming to an end! i really enjoyed this story, loved the subtle hook up in the end, il be looking out for your next fic!

Perfect! I love the ending! I love how real the characters feel in this piece, this is Sara and Grissom.

Yeah, okay, you've sucked me in. What in interesting premise, and I am already enjoying it thoroughly, only one chapter in. You know, the autism angle gets me good, and of course, you are painting an accurate picture. Go you! Hee. I'm anxious to finish this now. Thanks.