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| DarkBlaziken 2007-12-24 ch 5, | abusekool... laughed SO much at EVERYTHING. from Nergal's plans to Santa to well, EVERYTHING. *gasps for air again* Karel is going nuttier...and woh, Jaffar's scared of Lowen with a kitchen knife? |
| DarkBlaziken 2007-12-24 ch 4, | abuseHAHAHAHA! nice one~! i loved the Legault-and-Matthew-sophisticatedness... all the stuff about the lock... and the part about the banana, and the "no throwoing things" and how it led to Jaffar... HAHA. |
| DarkBlaziken 2007-12-24 ch 3, | abusehaha...Karel...French Toast...*gasps for breath* |
| DarkBlaziken 2007-12-24 ch 2, | abuseHAHAHA! that is So funny! Nils, evil...haha... Jaffar and Raven...overprotective...haha... |
| Why Do I Need a Cool Name 2006-05-20 ch 5, | abusehey look I'm flaming your fic Jordan...Just Kidding...I didn't even bother reading it! LoL! |
| chaos0619 2006-01-06 ch 5, | abuseLOL this is funny! hope u update soon! |
| Ultimate Aries 2005-12-30 ch 5, | abuseYes! Yes! Yes! Vinegar hand grenade! I love it!! reat story, but Sharn is a little bit OOC for the story. I ea, ome on. You have completley hilarious and mosly random stuff, and now you've got the collage professor serious dude. Not very consistant, are we? Oh, yeah. Have you updated Fall of the Fang yet? I'm waiting for the next OC to show up. (wink wink, nudge nudge) |
| Toki Kishitani 2005-12-28 ch 5, | abuseTK: *ROTFLMAO!* How did I miss this before?!!? HAHAHAHAHAHA!! XD And you have my sidekick! *huggles Nils* Nils: I prefer the term 'Hero Support'. Lyn: She just saw Sky High... >_>; Legault: ...You made me an idiot. *eye twitch* TK: ...Okay... Just calm down, Legault. Legault: *twitch* TK: Erm... o_O; Hey Nils...! Nils: Yeah? TK: Are the padded rooms still open? Le: *body twitch* Nils: Yeah. So? *tilts head* TK: Hey Farina! Give you ten thousand gold to take Legault to Padded Room Number 32! Farina: *appears outta nowhere* Deal! *grabs money bag and Legault and flys off to the specified room* TK: Phew! Nils: ...I don't get it. Lyn: ...*looks at Nils* I can't believe you made Jordan act like Sain. Nils: *sheepish* Lyn: *grins* Good boy! *gives him a chocolate chip cookie* Nils: CHOCO! =D *grabs cookie* TK: ...*whimper* Don't I get one, Lyn? Lyn: No. TK: PWEASE? *puppy eyes* Lyn: ...Oh, fine. *hands over a cookie* TK: YAY! CHOCO! *grabs cookie* Lyn: -_- I'm surrounded by morons. TK: *munch* Update soon *munch* 'kay, Draknal? *munch* Or da evil *munch* monkeys shall *munch* eat your brains. *finishes cookie* Nils: Yay for Evil Monkeys! =D |
| K-Gforever 2005-12-27 ch 5, | abuseHah, now we're back on track of the whole Christmas topic. ^_^ Heh, Jaffar, Muffins, French toast, baking soda, and viniger? What more could one ask for? XD A thickening plot that's it! Heh, I also liked the Nergal parts! XD Oh, and thanks for the advertising thanks! And I'm working on ch6 which I'm planing to get it up by this new year. ;) |
| Rio Hitzamure 2005-12-27 ch 5, | abuseoh no, a runaway Tactician...eh, who can blame him. the group is a bit hard to deal with Serra: Rio, i need you to help me with my make-up. ... gotta go. good job on the chapter, and can't wait to read the next |
| Nightmare3 2005-12-27 ch 5, | abuseHAHAHAHA! This chapter was great, it had me in tears. Oh no! Karel has been explodeded! Fiora: There are to many -eds on expolded Nightmare: eh who cares, and Jordan's gone AWOL oh the drama! Fiora: and you were introduced -sharpens lance- Nightmare: Hey I'm 'hawt!' you can't argue with that! Fiora: you also got beaten by Eliwood Nightmare: -dies of shame- But yeah really funny chapter and I enjoyed the way I was portrayed, I was smart! Karel: -throws shiney thing over cliff- Nightmare: SHINEY! -dives after- P.S. could you check out my new fic? its called Afterwards and its a Karel X Lyn, again I love this fic |
| A BlackHole 2005-12-27 ch 5, | abuseRUN TACTICIAN! RUN! Ahem. An excellent amount of randomness contained within the chapters of this whole story. Great ideas, randomness, and all that stuff too. It's like ten gallons of randomness contained in a two gallon jug. The French Toast and Muffin conflict has only begun! Who will claim victory over the territories of the world!? Will Karel's mighty cinnamon sugar-y goodness convince everyone to vote for him! Or will Lowen's political propaganda about the MANY different kinds of muffins win the day! Can cinnamon toast best muffins!? Or will the corn muffin ally with the brand flakes and save the day? Is the Tactician really running? Will Nils continue to be evil? Will Nergal's newest sought out plan work? Will this story continue even though Christmas is over!? STAY TUNED TO FIND OUT! ...Meanwhile Matthew: Horrible news, Hector! The Black Fang are preparing to attack us! A pause. Hector: So? Serra: What, do you WANT us living under a communist/dictatorship government? A pause. Hector: No. Oswin: THEN WHY DON'T WE STOP THEM?! Hector: Because we're too lazy. And because Nils glued everyone to their chairs. So the Black Fang walks in and conqures Ostia Sonia: Yes! We are now in command! We are...uh, what now? Nergal: We start another Communist/dictatorship regime, this time in Ostia! Sonia: I knew that. Nergal: But now we need to start a secret police group! Linus, you can be the head. Linus: So, uh, what do the secret police do? Nergal: Nothing. They're secret. |
| Ultimate Aries 2005-11-15 ch 4, | abuseOh, come off it! (blinks)(stares at computer) Wow. I wonder where that came from. Oh, well. The way you're writing (and due to the constant perverted and homosexual jokes made by the entire Tuba section) the way I'm reading it, Karel has a French toast fetish. This is a simple mental condition, and can easily be solved by a hot tub, and iguana, and six packages of Jello. Enjoy, and Keep It Up! |
| Narakusnoone 2005-11-10 ch 4, | abuseAnd where is wil, wallace, Harken, Isadora, and Heath? Set Them up in the next chapter. |
| Northernsword 2005-10-08 ch 4, | abuseThis is funny...but kinda...random. Jaffar talks a lot when threatening their tactician doesn't he? Well, at least Nils is the only person OOC...or not. He's a shady person...well for the pairings: RavenxRebecca JaffarxNino EliwoodxFiora LuciusxSerra Karelxany girl who likes french toast that's pretty much it... |