Awe~! That was so kawaii!! ^o^

awesome story! =P

I absolutely love this story. it really is a fantasy that women can look to in hopes that their guy/chick will do the same.

I loved this one shot.It was really cool.


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Aw!! That was so cute! This one shot was great! Continue writing!! =)
Sincerely,
~Miss. Amy~

that was just adorable.

Its gorgeous! Love it!

I really dislike Inuyasha/Kikyo, but I understand it had to be that way for the plot...And because you chose for it to be that way. You are a very good author. Very, very good. Silverbug2012

Very nice!

well done :) i really like this story bravo

Haha, nice ending!

;D

write more and work on your profreading girl I noticed quite a bit this time most at the end

That was okay. Pretty darn cute. Well, I really didn't like the way she said yes when he asked her to marry him. I would have just shouted yes, not made some speech. Also, you sort of forgot to put an ! when she said it, instead you put a period. Other wise it was a good story. Don't take it in a bad way, I just tend to be mean some times. Flaming stories is something I do. Sorry.

what would you do if that ever happened to you but you weren't ready for marriage talk about a broken heart but anyways beautiful story

this story is so cute, what a great way to start a day.