I thought you did a marvelous job of telling this story. Very creative, detailed, and often intense. And, of course, the cliffhanger chapters didn't hurt any! I'm hoping to be able to find the sequel!

wow! i loved this story! i cant wait to read the sequel! got me hooked! :D

This was great. I love the cliffhanger ending. The sequel is on my list of reads next. You do Sam and Jack well.

Kelli

wow - ee that rocks, i'm gonna go to the next one right away

oh oh horrible ending ! KILLED HER OFF ! NO !

I loved this story! The ending was sad, though. Was there ever a sequel? I really want Jack to find Sam...:(

I did like this story! It was indeed well written! But i completely hate the ending! Sam should not have left! I hate hate HATE sad endings!

lol (re 'Jam and Sack')

That was an excellent story.

Hi,

This is good!

One slight thing O'Neill has two ll's, there's anotfher Colonel O'Neill who spells in with One l he has no sense of humour

wow, this is such an emotional story

nice!

I'm heading for the sequel RIGHT NOW!

Okay...not much I can say to this one except WOW! This is one of the best fics (of any fandom) I have read, both plot-wise and in form! I did happen to notice the occasional typo or incorrect punctuation, but I'm hardly the one to call attention to it, so just ignore this sentence.

You're writing is awesome! The only reason I'm not starting on the sequel right away is because it is currently after midnight, but rest assured I'll be halfway through it by noon, lol.

...Of course now I won't be able to sleep... :-

Kyizi, If you ever post this entire story in its entirety (i know i can't spell, that's what spellcheck and beta readers are for) i think it might make more sense to Sam to wake up by saying 'Colonel' rather than Jack. After all, she doesn't quite remember everything yet, right?

Still adoring...

Computer issues or not, you did just fine honey. I know i've read at least to Chapter 12 before, but i'm reading the entire thing again en masse. It is just as good as i remember.