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| TasteinMen 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseHow absolutely beautiful. And the research you must have done, and the effort that you put into writing the story and making it mathematically and musically accurate! I am in awe at your skill. Entirely plausible and just bloody good. Are you sure that you aren't a Numb3rs writer? |
| Rose of Pearl 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful... I don't really know what else to say, except that I loved the way you described the music, and how in awe Charlie was of mystery girl's inspiration. I really liked this. |
| Sizzle94 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat story I loved how you brought music and numbers together. I studied music in college for 2 years and still love music. |
| Piccolo Chic 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Very nicely done! I can't wait to read more from you! Piccolo Chic |
| Kippling Croft 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. I wonder if he called her? I would love to see more of this storyline. Please could you do another chapter or two or three or... well you get the picture. |
| Urania Black 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed it. Your description of the music was spot on. Good job. I hope to see some more of your work soon. |
| shoey 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseOh, very nice! Well written, especially the musical analysis. You must be a musician. I love the parallels between math and music. Music is so very mathematical. |
| D. Lerious 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abusegreat little piece! loved the end! |
| Patty 2005-07-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell done! Bravo!! You write extremely well. It seemed that I could almost hear the music. And leave it to Charlie to translate the encounter into numbers, bless him! Thank goodness the girl took the initiative; she knows a good thing when she sees it. |
| graceofnight 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abusethis is wonderful. you articulate Charlie's passion for numbers perfectly. |
| Scifi-warper 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseOH! Charlie may just have found himself a girlfriend. I like this story. You should add a companion piece with the girl. |