Basic, but still very good. Continue soon.

Welcome to the team!
And I have to agree with Ryu here. While the rest of us in the Guild know what these guys' motivation and everything are, you need to explain it better for the readers. Explain a bit of their history, goals, and characters as you go. It makes the readers connect to the team more.

Welcome to the guild, custommagnum.

Well, while it's not exactly the best work, I can honestly say it could be worse. (I know, I've written worse before.) One of the peeves I have about your story here is that it's a bit lacking on detail and description. And when I talk about this, I'm not talking about only the physical description, but go into the thought processes of the characters as well. Show emotion, show activity while they are speaking. These are things that have plagued me in the past and still do sometimes. You have to really get the narration down to where the reader can practically experience what the characters are.