A druggie Angelina bothers me, but it's never bothered me so well( you can interpret THAT anyway you want to).

I like how you portray him, it's very...opaque.

This was interesting. I like the thought of Angelina as head girl.

I adored how teenage you made them. It was quite something. You're always so perfect with your characterizations. I think i've learned a lot from you. XDD

Please, keep up the goods.

ASQ

This is your best characterization of Montague yet. The way he doesn't turn some students in to Umbridge because he knows what she'll do to them says a lot about him.

Angelina's thank-you gesture was cute. And the line "the Ministry had declared the hero insane" really struck a chord.

~Redcandle17

Oh my goodness. This was amazing. I always love your stuff and I've yet to be disappointed. You're an amazing writer, you really are. I liked the interaction Angelina and Montague had in this, they weren't horrible to each other like they always are yet they were still in character. And the descriptions throughout this whole thing was amazing. The part that got me was when he first looked upon Angelina. I'm not really for smoking and when characters do it I always kind of look down on them a little but your description of Angelina lighting up was so detailed that it didn't stick out to me like it normally would have. Well done, you really are amazing. Keep up the great work!

i'm absolutely speechless. i loved this one -- completely adored it...every single word was perfect, every single scentence fit the last one so well, it was one of the best fics i think that i've ever read, the characterization was great as well, i - well, it was pretty much perfection.
great job -- you've got to write more like these.
~angelface04~