 sirwayde 9/12/09 . chapter 13Great story.I really love misao/saitou fanfics.I hope you update this story soon.There are too many stories around that remain unfinished. |
 Kikushi 2/26/08 . chapter 11Excellent. The story plot flows nicely and the characters are somewhat in tune with their personalities, with the exception of a few minor scenes... But no matter.
A very plausible story thus far. Please continue. I am hoping to find out how the story reaches its conclusion. :)
I love this! |
 vtori77777 6/22/07 . chapter 13wow! Your story is so awesome! I love it! I can't wait till the next chapter comes! did i mention that your story is so awesome! lol :D |
 vastare 3/4/07 . chapter 13Wow, I truly love this. I've read the whole thing in one day and I just couldn't get enough of it. I love the whole mistery. Truly original. For some reason I just love the side pairing of Tea and Chou. Gems like this are what makes me addicted to this pairing. *grins* I can't wait to read more of this. Good luck and keep up the great work. _ |
 SodiumFree 1/28/07 . chapter 11Alright first things first your story is absolutly amazing. I have never been a fan of the Saito and Misao pairing, but this story made me recondisder. Please Update as soon ad possiable because it would be a waste talent not too.
SodiumFree |
 EcstasyOfSesshoumaru 12/9/06 . chapter 13Update or I eat your face off. Or not because that sounds gross, but I will be horribly angry. |
 Warg 11/14/06 . chapter 1Hey..
Sorry it took me so long to get to this.. but u know how it goes.
Aanyway.. nice chapter here.. detailed and disturbing.. atmosphere intense.. and the entire setting accents the rushed pacing.. seriously, good work.
Though i have to say that u used a lot that is, well, cliche here.. and while that can be placed in the text it really should be avoided in dialog when ur not putting it in a joking light. Also.. dear, just how many times did u write "amber" in this chapter? :P
Hehe, right.. it was nice to see a new chapter and i'll be looking forward to more.
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 silver-kitsune223 11/10/06 . chapter 13Heehee, Saito blushing... Well good story so far! I look forward to more. |
 Alis Volat Propris 11/7/06 . chapter 13O Yae for the update. Glad you've been creative in dealing with your writers blocks. I haven't been as succesful as I'd like to be in curing mine. Hopefully with some amazing museness and some luck it'll come back. I loved Saitou's predatory ness in this chapter. I also absolutely loved the interaction betwen Saitou and Misao when he was trying to get the door open. Theres definitely something between them whether they want to admit it or not. Hopefully there will be some more amazing interaction. And of course then theres the curiosity of what happened that fated night. I'm really enjoying the way you portray the characters and I wish I had as much skill at humor as you do. Loving the story, loving the update and hoping for more to come soon ish
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 samuraiduck27 10/28/06 . chapter 13:0 OH MY GOD IT'S AN UPDATE!
...Then again, I'm so one to talk.
BUT YAY! I'M SO HAPPY! I was wondering just last week when you were going to update this, too. Weird.
On to the review! I don't know how many times I've told you this, but the interaction between Saito and Misao is priceless. I absolutely love the way they bicker with each other. :DD
Ooh... and it seems that Misao, as per usual, has problems keeping her big mouth shut. XP I'd be giving an understatement if I said that I think she may have touched a nerve with that "wallowing knee-deep in blood" comment she pulled... D:
Hahaha... I can't wait to see how Misao reacts when she wakes up to find Saito right next to her. Can we say freaking out? XD That's sure to be good.
Aww... *attempts to hug Aoshi* That little ending blurb made all the happy amused feelings from the sleeping-Misao scene go out the window. DD: BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD!
Great chapter, if a bit short. :P I can understand the block though, and hey- at least it's better than nothing! I can't wait for more; please don't take as long for the next update? Please? -U |
 anime pixie 10/28/06 . chapter 13 i'm still enjoying this story. i hope that you keep the updates coming and much faster than they have been recently. happy writing! waiting for your next chapter. |
 Kay-san 10/27/06 . chapter 13HOLY COW! AN UPDATE? I was beginning to fear we had lost you forever. *relieved sigh* And some new Saitou/Misao interaction to soak up. I swear it's getting harder and harder to find Saitou/Misao fics I haven't read yet. But a super new chapter to a great story makes me happy happy! I've been suspecting Aoshi for a while now. Hm. *narrows eyes at Aoshi* Alright, ignore my rambling ways. Tired Kay-san has trouble shutting up. Great story, great chapter and hope to read the next bit soon! Hugs & Kisses! |
 Ruler of Destiny 8/5/06 . chapter 12The shortness is okay. We're all busy.
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 BelleDayNight 8/4/06 . chapter 4I liked this! "You MAN!" LMAO! And then she drew blood...but he deserved it! HA! |
 BelleDayNight 8/4/06 . chapter 3LOL I love it when Saitou names her weasle girl! He's so good at pissing EVERYONE in the RK cast off! You have to love that about him. ) |