Nice, I did notice you used a lot of different descriptions for her eyes, which seemed a little excessive (clover, mossy, ivy...) Beautiful descriptions, but I think its sometimes better to keep at a minimum. But I really enjoyed this fic =) Good work.

great teaser!!

I like the eye contact!! its awesome, like the ingering words!!

I think its sweet Wilson is concerned for her!! :>

really awesome chap!! I think House should mind his own business!! I like how you pull the audience into the story make them care about the characters!!

Whoa, intense chapter!!

yeah!! you tell him cameron, I like it that she surprised him leaving him speechless, what a exit!! I like the confrontation at the microscope!! this is very well written!! good job!!

you mention their brows wAy too much!

Good story sry so short update

this was pretty good... kinda lost me with the plot, or lack of... the constant referal to brows became a little tiresome.. but otherwise, you write good

Wow! What a good story. Can't wait to read the sequel!

hey, i really like this story and i hope i read more of it soon!

Keep. Going. PLEASE!

Ahh love the detail in this story and no you cannot leave it like this...that's just wrong and unnaturaly cruel! Part 2! Ahh the angst so delicious...I must have more...purty please.

That was a pleasant surprise to see a 'new chapter' email in my inbox, and turns out to be this very story! Welcome back =D

The last part of this chapter was very enjoyable, i liked how it was freeflowing and there was great chemistry, with the characters staying IN character.

the Mindy thing was great, haha XD loved that

I like how you're adding Wilson into the fix, i'm not sure of your intentions, but a 3rd person always makes things more interesting.

I'd definately say a sequel!! You have not satisfied me with this ending! ;P Lovely story.