 SharonToggle 4/17/01 . chapter 4ARK! no! not Goten! *snif* you killed off both of the Son brothers in four chapters! so... so how did goten die, exactally? drank himself to death? *sniffle* that's so sad... I bet Videl feels really bad now! "if he wants to die when he's 30, let him!" HUMPH! phooey on her! :( THIS IS A REALLY COOL FIC! write more soon! I really like it! |
 SharonToggle 4/12/01 . chapter 3ooo! Creepy! poor Gohan! *shivvers* this whole story is giving me the creeps! YUCK! This is very well written, though. That little poem's creepy. *thinks* waaaaiiittt a minute... how many guests are there? Bra, Pan, Gohan, Goten, Videl, Sharpener, Marron, Trunks... that's it, right? WAIT! What about Mr. and Mrs. Briefs? That makes 10! And-and the poem said the first one was gonna choke and die, right? OOOO, this is VERY creepy! Who's the guy in the background pulling all the strings? This N. U. Owens fellow? Oooo, i wanna strangle him for killing off poor ol' Gohan! How could you do something so mean? Now I'm gonna be left in suspense until you post again! grrr... Good story! Post more! Soon! ..Sharrie.. |