Please write more soon. What happens next?

Aw damn. I was going to throw in a quote of what I really liked, but then I would have to paste in the entire second chapter and while that would be pleasing, it would break the page here and I am sure a coupleof plagiarism laws as well. It's good. In character, yet not; they are grown up after all.

OUTSTANDING!

LOL! Very well done!