lol ^^

Okay... Wait... Um, I'm something of a grammar nazi so maybe it's just me, but when I saw your "Japanese Words Okay To Use in Fics" I imeadietly went NO. Could you please just stick to one language in a fic? It makes it easier to read.

And your Oc is kind of Sueish... *most would call her a transfer!sue*

Um, sorry if this sounds like a flame... It's really not ment to be... I mean asides from the two things I mentioned above everything else if pretty good. You have great spelling and your story actually HAS a plot *attributes far too rare in the Pit of Voles*

*P.S. It would probably be best if you took your age out of your bio. There are some scary freaks running around on the internert*

are you gonna finish this fic? you didn't finish untitled3 either! Plz continue! Onegai!

Wery cool. I have the same idea to YYH, but yet to be written. Eh heh..
You continuing this or what? Continue! Yay! But don't pair yourself with the main chars, that's very uncool. *going happily sit in a corner to wait more*
Mata ne~

Luv, rebe

this story is hilarious.
it really is a nice story and very refreshing.
i was dying of all the serious fanfics i was reading.
i nice light one with humor was just what i needed.
wonderfull.
looks like i found the perfect one.
i like your original character, even thoug i cant help but think it might be you.
i just love the idea of being in a manga.
and its kinda funny speaking english when they dont know what the hell your saying.
lol.
this story is so interesting.
i hope you update it soon.
i really want to read more.

Ja ne~

~ Kari ~

WTF!! the ending threw me off! but it's a AWESOME story! soundz very fun! keep up the updating!