Aw. This was such a cute story! I gave it to my friend to read but she was very imature about it.

Well anyways you are a very good writer when it comes to writing about cosmo and wanda love.

hi! wow, i really liked this fic! but you'veheard that before. i can't really think of how else to say this, but... aw! i'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but that was really sweet! especially Cosmo! well, update soon, and i'll certainly keep reading!

ASDKJSAHFSIGFUSIDGISG- *insert incoherent ramblings here*

This... Now *this* is art. I mean... There are very few lemons out there that are as well-thought-out, well-delivered and _poetic_ as this. There's a fine line (well, maybe not so fine) between 'cliche' and 'wow', and you just crossed over to 'wow' so effortlessly :O I... I have no words XD

(okay, maybe I do. XD)

The imagery and characterization alone astounds *_* Your Cosmo and Wanda are so perfectly written - you've nailed them both so *perfectly*. Cosmo's 'stupidity' becoming his 'genius', his hesitance, his naiveté, his *everything*

wowie great story...really sweet...i am reading Romeo and Juliet in class and laughed i read maidenhead. I've never heard it used outside the play...great story by a great author!

Gah, where to begin...I feel like a total idiot for not reviewing before. I've read both chapters of this story multiple times because so wonderful and beautifully writen. It makes me love this couple even more, since there are so few of them in existance. Oh yeah, gotta quick question for ya, where's chapter three!?!?!?!?!? *falls down* I want to read it!

I'm going to be watching you *clicks all list choices* Bye for now!

I love this piece of art you've wrote. I think you've nailed the personalities of Cosmo and Wanda perfectly. You wrote exactly what the experience of making love should be like, from them both being virgins, to them thinking about the other's pleasure more so than themselves, to the feeling the person feels. Sex isen't some thing to be tossed around as if it were nothing. CURSE ALL ** and other things like that DEATH TO IT ALL. Anyway sorry about the rage ranting, this is my favorite story, one of the best pices if not the best story I've ever red. Thank-you for weiting it, update another if you can please.

M... lemony goodness

Gosh it's so hard to find good lemons out there, it really is. You get the total perverts who have no idea what their writing or which body parts are where XD (insert pole A into slot B)

Then you've got the total emos who chock it full despair and angst and it's just too much

Ah, but thank goodness for the people who know what they're talking about and execute the idea of intercourse without making the reader recoil in disgust, but rather hang on every detail. Fantastic job with that scene.

You've hit the characters right on the head again perfectly. Omg I just wanna cuddle Cosmo he's just so gosh darn CUTE! XD (and the "seven! line...had me cracking up to no end) Lovely play on Cosmo's emotions and thoughts, not to mention both of their feelings for one another.

The beginning with the wedding recap was absolutly adorable!

Great work! Keep writing and making me a happy fangirl ^^

wo this is great
defo adiing it to my faves!

Oh sorry i no i just reveiwed but i forgot to say i like your style and the way you made thier sexual moments seem passonate and meaningful. K sorry had to that.

see ya,
White Dragon 69

No, no i like the title i think it works with the story i mean Cosmo's all worried and ** then He...well you know and then he's at peace and so's Wanda and everybody's all happy and peacefull. Great job. Update soon and all that.

Your pal,
White Dragon 69

Trixie21! You write so beautifully!
Its somewhat a shame how music videos and other crap these days treat sex as nothing special, like saying hello. But you truly refreshed the idea of how it really should be! Thankyou!!

you call that bad?! i loved it! that's so sweet! don't be so ** yourself! this is really well written!
he wrote 'i do'on his arm... funny and cute and so cosmo!

Wow. This is the best piece of fiction I've read in a while. I'm usually not a lemon person, but this one didn't make me feel too sick... it was more of a warm feeling. So, so well written.

onece agian cute make ch 3!

That was so cute! I think you should know that your the only one who has writen such a story I like it alot!