A perfect encapsulation of how I see their relationship and many points in the series. May be near the end, those lines can be crossed but generally speaking, The Lt. and the Col. have a restrained sort of thing going on, at least on the surface. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing!

this has so much promise, why does it end here? T_T

I loved this. I thought it was completely honest and sharp-edged. Characterizations were spot-on.

Very well done. I really liked this. I do see them concerned with boundaries, lines they cannot (should not) cross-particularly Hawkeye. There was something very sad about it, as well, when she hurries out of his apartment as though she's done somthing wrong..

Cool fiction! I think you totally got the characters as described in the manga. They are both very careful not to cross the line, so their romantic moments are just so different from any other couples, so formal and professional and their story is so frustrating...I really loved it!

Is there an update or am I gonna cry T_T

GASP! sO CUTE! loved it 100%!

You should add more to that. It was good!

That was really nice. *sigh* Who cares about rules, those who love she be free to love. :)

Wow, this really describes the relationship between Riza and Roy well. I was very pleased to find no spelling or grammar errors (I'm sure you know how annoying that can get after a while). I love hearing stories about Roy in a helpless postion, and where Riza is almost overcome by temptation. I would love to see Roy a little more vulnerable, though (in a different story). Perhaps Roy is mortally wounded, and Riza is the only one around. I would love to see a factor of tragedy thrown into one of your stories.

nicely written and i like it. but it left me with 1 question in mind, how can they stay as a couple when they avoid physical contacts with each other like that?

Oh, I liked this. The opening bit especially. The wording was perfect, and it really captured their relationship. I really enjoy the way you write Riza, you have her character down very well. And I like how you allude to her feelings for Roy without actually coming out and saying it. It fits very well with the theme of the fic and with Riza's character.

THis is so frustrating, do you even check the reviews for your old one shots anymore?

I've read a few Hawkeye and Mustang fanfics these past few months after watching the show, and none of em seemed quite right, but I think you've got it dead on. I love your characterizations, and the beginning just caught my attention. The contrasting of relationships. A very cool story, and I love this couple. Thanks for writing it.

He hee...very nice again. I am liking these little fics, and Roy needs a friend...

-K-