This is EXACTLY the kind of power and enchantment that I have been looking to put into my own writing, but I can't seem to capture it. This story describes how I feel some days, when I'm caged inside my mind. Lord knows I've tried to make this style my own, but my writing always comes out sounding forced and infantile. After reading some of your work, I can usually get into the mood in which I need to be to write anything worth reading. Thanks a lot for writing this and helping me get a lot off my chest. Keep writing,

the14milo

Wow! This was amazing! It's been a long time since I've read something that made me cry. Great story!

Whoa...this is remarkable. This is a side of Draco Malfoy I've never come across. You sound like a Draco analyst here. I can see him banging his fist on the table, yelling about his feelings to the reader on hatred. Great monologue.

This reminds me of Dilandau-sama in Escaflowne. *dodges objects thrown from audience* Ok, ok! I'll shut up about Escaflowne already!

... *tear*

Oooooh...you have really got this style of yours down. And you pull it off gracefully. How strange..

I'm getting slightly worried now, because all my favourite stories seem to be really dark and depressing. What does that say about me? This one *is* really good though.

I don't know what to say.

Ooo! Very good, I like. . It kinda reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe... because, you know, that's kinda how he was... -.- I think... Or maybe he went insane because he had rabies.. but that doesn't matter when you're choking on a granola bar, does it? Oh, and those "popular" girls shouldn't leave their notes lying around... heeheehee... I found a note... it's so stupid, it's the funniest thing I've ever read... uh.. anyways, back on the topic, it sounded very much like something Edgar Allen Poe would write... maybe you, too... but I haven't read your writing in a long time, so it probably does sound like something you'd write... oh well... 98/100 (49/50) due to spelling errors (I'm going into English teacher mode, stop me before it's too late) you got an A, congrats. But, like I said, I'm choking on a granola bar and should stop typing up this long review now...

Whoa. pikaCheeka, this is the deepest, darkest angst piece I've ever seen from you. Are you okay? _ The depth and despair in this is... almost disturbing I have to say... Poor Draco... Goah... it's so dark I can't even describe it... like a black hole, sucking all the light in the world... or a dementor's kiss... Well, welcome back to the fanfic world, PikaCheeka. _

::Blinks:: Ok...Right... How should I respond? Clap politely or send off fireworks? I mean, jeez...That was wonderful. Hopefully ffnet let's me review(It hasn't been letting me tonight). Just wanna say that this is amazing work, as always when it come to Draco. Well...Hm, nothing more to say. Great job, keep up the writing?

EEE! Oh, crap, how did I miss this? It was great. I look forward to all your ficcies. And now there's one, and I forget to read it. I wish you'd write more, cause I was so excited you came back, and I've been looking for your stuff all March. There's only one you, Pika, and that one is a naturally wonderful writer. :) I'll stop feeding your ego now.

Hey! Good job on the emotion, but gosh; why is Draco always so miserable and sad? Why? It's awful that he's like that... Poor guy. _ I'm glad ya wrote though; bye.

Awesome, PikaCheeka. That *was* depressing yet way different from anything else I read on ff.net. You've got some great talent, especially when it comes to writing from a Malfoy's p.o.v.

Yup, you definately haven't written anything in a long time. Neither have I, actually. It's all school's fault *pout*. Wonderfully angsty. I haven't read any real angst in weeks. This is so...you. Draco's dead... )