And I like this one too...because for some reason it is more poetic. I have changed my mind now (because they change you know, minds do I mean) and I am thinking Ryou - hiding from his friends at school. Even on the show, his friends were supposed to be Yuugi etc, weren't they? And they often ditched him. Who had he then? Only Bakura, who honestly he didn't even know was there for about a million years.

Like a page torn out of a diary, or thoughts stolen from somebody's mind. Which it is, I guess.

My instinct is that it's Malik. And his darker half? Alternating? I don't know, I see traces of both. Probably better you don't tell anybody... Keep them guessing.

Oh wow what a sad chapter! But also awesome. I really like this chapter!

Hm, I thought it might be Kaiba...but then you said 'I smile...you see me smile. I cry...you see me smile' so that kind of rules out that possibility. Ryou Bakura, or is that too obvious? Heck it could be anyone, they're all a bunch of head cases...

ReaperRain

Reminds me of Mariku?

That made me sad... *rolls up gloves, then rolls down sleeves and immediately discards all sharp objects, for she is freaked out by cutting, and can't bear to look at them for the time being* ...That was long.

I think... it is either Ryou, my cute little angsty bunny hikari, or Yami no Bakura, my huggable little sadomasochist angst teddy bear. Either way, it would work. I loved your style. It provides such a... perfect MOOD for this... It's wonderful. It makes me cringe. I totally feel for whoever it is. (Hehe curse you empathy..!) I wonder, who was it at the door, though? Who could the people in this be... Quite a mystery. Beautiful. ]

Awe... poor Ryou(?). I think it's Ryou. ONLY Ryou-chan can angst THAT much. He's a cute little fluffy angst-bunny. Kinda like Ed off of Fullmetal Alchemist.

ANGST BUNNIES!

Okay... well, then. That was my random happy moment.

Very well done. The dots add a nice touch of uniqueness to it. Me likey.

Poor Ryou. If it IS Ryou. Seriously, though, who is it?

Did Bakura hurt Ryou and now Ryou's all angsty? Eh, who'll ever know. The author, yes.

Keep writing. I love your style.

Again, poor Ryou-chan.

-Raven

That was so amazing! I loved it! So much angst and sadness! I really like those dots! What an awsome style! How amazing!

wow! that was really good, perfect for my mood! the dots

made a good effect! I'm guessing that that's Ryou...

I think it's Yugi...

O.O wow that's deep

Oh wow. Awesome job! The whole '...' set the whole scene. Well if this is to be the quality of the musings then I cannot wait for more. Hmm. I wonder who it is... maybe Ryou...or (Yami) Bakura...

You said so little but it came out as so much. Very impressive! I have no idea who this is, but I am guessing at Ryou. Awsome story! The dots were giving a good effect too.

Great! I luv it. Check out my fics sometime.

The dotdotdot's between the lines gave the story the right texture it needed. Well done.

It can be sad, can't it? when writing something like this, or reaading it. Writing it especially, if it connected at all. It was well done.