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At first, I thought this is AU story.

After read all of them, I think this is almost-AU story.

I really like the implicit humour in this story.

You're a great writer.

Please write more!

Nice fic :)

I loved the way you wrote this story. The multi-personality thing was really interesting.

brilliant plot twist. I loved it very much!

Thank you for writing this!

one of the most *beautifully* written

Shin/Shi [CoAi] fanfics I've ever read!

I applaud you; that story was *wonderful*

I'm especially glad it's been completed

Though, I'm a bit confused on how there are "two" Conans and "two" Ais... and there was another Shinichi?

And about the antidote (pardon my slow-witted-ness ;)

But I very much enjoyed the story. It was very elaborate, and the romance parts were just amazing

Think it's a little suspicious that Ai would suddenly jump to the conclusion about Shinichi's father without any proof.

CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

Wow, some major plot twists here. I can really tell that you put a lot of effort into the plot and you've really done a good job at making the mystery seem so Detective-Conan-like. I'm only a bit shocked that Shinichi hadn't solved the case by the time of this chapter like he usually does.

Also a bit curiou as to if you're going to include Akemi anywhere.

CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

I think that you did a very good job at working out that whole 'Ai staying at Shinichi's house' scenario without making it feel too forced or random. Trust me, A LOT of authors have problems with that but you're just surfing through it.

Though, you might've made Shincihi start liking Ai a bit too early. I mean in canon, he's known her for quite a long time and isn't aware of feeling any attraction towards her.

CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

I think you did pretty well in capturing the sarcasm between Ai and Shinichi. Though, Ai does seem a little depressed since in your story, she doesn't wor kfor the Black Organisation.

CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

Ooh, this one was intersting.

You included some mystery and murder into the genre, which I'm pretty glad that you did since it's quite surprising how many people leave it out of their romance stories.

CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

Interesting plot so far; I can see that you're really willign to take a risk with a completely different story idea. You also did a good job of Ai's sense of sarcasm in your writting. I'm glad that you're so talented in being able to express personality in not just dialogue but text as well.

I would be careful not to make Ai rant on TOO much though.

CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

who was the woman that died when shiho was still in london?i dont think it was her real mother right?... whats that relationship with akai thing? i though akia was inlove with akemi... and did akai kill akemi? what happened to her?

This story is so confusing. Ity seriously shut down my mind. Ya know how ya write. IT was really confusing, but it was beautiful. Althought I really didn't get a bit of this story.

I truly loved this story, it has one of (if not the) best twists I ever read.

The ending was perfect, although rather not expected, and the plot now is loophole-free.

I really have to thank you for your efforts in writing this amazing piece of art , so Thank You Very Much