The story was good until 5th chapter. I of course will continue to read this but for the life of me I can't imagine such a lame 'misunderstanding' happening. Hinata knows Naruto better than everyone and considering her intelligence and personality I can't see her just leave Naruto hanging like that and not bothering to even check up on him for almost TWO friggin' WEEKS!

And what's with the make up? "Naruto I'm sooo sorry!" "Oh, it's no biggie Hinata-chan. I just gave up living. We're cool" That's practically what happened and personally I don't find it very realistic after what Naruto went through. They need to talk it through and come to better understanding.

One more thing. Were you by any chance on crack when writing Naruto's preliminary match? Hello? Kankuro could have just dissect/decapitate/disembowel the regenerating (you've exaggerated that particular ability a great deal here btw) unresponsive berk (not really Naruto here) easily. And yet he looses by chakra exhaustion. -_-

This is my first time almost flaming (I refuse to believe this is flaming!). But I just needed some proper venting and you're naturally my first choice. Sorry 'bout that. Good luck with your stories. Peace!

please update I WANT TO SEE HINATA PET NARUTO'S TAILS.

Please please update soon i am begging you your fic is too awesome to not update

This story just keeps getting better. I imagine things are going to get hard for our heroes as the Akatsuki prepares to attack. I'm not sure the sealing was successful since the feces was incinerated. Is he gone for sure? :) Yay! I love this story.

I like you author, I really like what you write! You're pretty awesome. You're also evil for making him fall asleep.

I'd also like to add that I do realize things have changed the second time through for Naruto. However, some of the major points remain (except Sasuke), that's what my question in the previous chapter was geared towards. No offense meant.

I'm pissed that Kabuto lived to see a new day. You saving something special for them? Or are you just being an evil author (LOL) and planning to trouble our heroes a little more?

Just one question, what has Naruto's coming back changed? I'm genuinely curious since the major events seem to have occurred anyway.

Good work!

Go Shikamaru! I'm glad Naruto got out of that funk. When are Naruto and Hinata going to go official?

I'm addicted to this fic. I'm not sure I'd do the scene with Hiashi the same way, but I don't understand the situation well enough to decide. I'm going on to the next chapter now.

I'm loving this story. I'm going to favourite it and add it to my alerts after I read all the chapters you have written so far. This is truly fantastic work. Great humour, nice action and hopefully great romance in the future.

great story

I like melodrama as much as the next person, but the last chapter and this were way over the top.

Hi, just found this fic again after way too long and wanted to say how much I enjoyed it!

When will you update?

amaziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing 3 wonderful.. love it.. will be more?

Loved it!