Hiei... Mary-Sue... Oh god I tell you, I laughed through the whole chapter! Hahahhahaha great job. Love it. Keep writing as always!

-Aeir

poor kuwa-chan, daijoubu kana? Ahh, shinanaide! Manga ga tsuzukanai! IYA!

Hikari: BRAVO! BRAVO! Yami: May I remind you, Hikari, that's you've done Mary-Sues. Hikari: HAVE NOT! They were based off of our friend, duh! Yami: As if! Toitsu: While those two fight this out, I shall now tell you strait out. I almost died laughing reading this. Lovely job. There's a difference between simple OC and Mary-sues. Mary-sues are just plan annoying, and I like how you portrayed that in this one-shot. OC are okay sometimes. Good job, five stars. Hikari/Yami: *Still fighting*

I like your story but was the Kuwabara bashing really neccesary?

Cute little story, rather amusing.

Cool!
Poor Hiei...

*twitching* I don't care how old and error filled those stories were, you didn't have to delete them, you could have just redone them and then deleted them, then post them again right away... right? (I don't have an account, I'm not sure how things work) Please, at least bring back Change of Heart and Just Once. Please. *gets down on hands and knees and begs shamelessly, ignoring the strange stares from onlookers*. The only reason I'm using this story to put this is that I've read this one already, and, um... PLEASE BRING THOSE STORIES BACK!

that was hilarious!

O_O AH SAMARA!

lol, well all is well and good, that was great. (except for the Kuwa-bashing) ahh, another Mary-sue destroyed...good work AD ^_^

lol this was the most hilarious one-shot i've ever read it was just so damn funny! I liked the idea of dropping the carrot topped idiot in the well *snicker* That was just too funny. DEATH TO ALL SUES!!

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Oh. My. Gods. ...

THAT IS FREAKING HILARIOUS!

And cute, too: "I'll ... love my sister forever."

:)

And hilarious.

Hey, where's Ms. Ryoko? She's not there! :(

Hilarious! Best Mary-Sue basher ever! :D

Elana: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... etc, etc, etc, ...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH...!!

People Named Frank: SHUT UP!

Elana: ... *crickets chirp* *crickets die 'cause me and Brie threw evil water at them* ...

Elana: ...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... etc, etc, etc, ...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH...!

People Named Bob: Ah... curse you AnimeDarkside! You have doomed us to a life of Elana's eternal laughter because your fic was so damn funny!! We beseech you to write another fic that will momentarily shut her up! PLEASE!

Elana: HAHAHAHAhaha... Hey, that's a good idea!!

People Named Joe: O.o o.O O.O o.o It.. it worked? FREEDOM!

Elana: *reads fic over again* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... etc, etc, etc, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

People Named Mary Sue: Hiei, come back to me!

People Named Frank, Bob, Joe and Elana: AH! MARY SUE! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!

And thus this review must end. If you didn't understand one word of this insanity, I'm pretty much saying that you, AnimeDarkside, are an amazing writer and should write many, many, more fics. Pretty much.

Yay!!

Your Laughing (People Named Frank, Bob,
and Joe: SHUT UP!) Reader,

Elana

aka EPearlFairy

omg! XD i loved it lmao well that was funny. good job ;)

lol That was the best!