this was a really good first chapter. i loved it. ilove the idea of shiverin and the name is awesome to! i do see though that u havent updated this fic in forever. i do hope that u find the time to do so! i really would like to read the end of this fic. yes i know im only on the first chapter. its that good. lmao. i cant wait to read more, so i am going to do just that. adios!

A soo good story! I read it on the french version, 'cause my english isn't so good to let me read in english.. (and 'cause i'm a little lazy XD)
I like Shiverin, it's a good idea (and sure a strong specie! can't wait that they bit someone... :D)
I would like to request to use your shiverin idea in one of my fics: Nephelims, Veelas and other desagrements.
I don't know if you speak french, so i explain: a fic from Alia-Karasu speak about a new specie like Shiverin, the Nephelim, and she gave me autorization to use it in a side-story.
But I want to introduce other special characters in it, some of my invention and i just think of yours...
I'll be happy if you gave me it, and be sure that i would say that Shiverin are your properties.
Thanks in advance, and good luck with your story (can't wait a new chapter!!

update soon

Great story. But Its follow. not fallow.

I hope you will continue your story.

I like it.. well done.. :) will there be another uppdate in the future?

please, please, please start updating again soon!!
its SUCH a good storyline, and I really, really want to know what happens to them. So again, please, please update soon!

God this is a good story :D But I'm so afraid I feel nauseas that Harry will be kidnapped and raped or something... Please please please don't let that happen. But the rest of the story is so good :D:D I have to continue reading now!! XD

this fic has been one of my favorite stories since forever, this fic was the reason I started reading H/D, and I'm really hoping that you'll finish this. I actually saw the start of this fic when you only had 1 chapter posted. and It's quite sad if I wouldn't be able to finish reading this. Anyway I would just like to ask if you'll still be updating this fic...

Anneth

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UPDATE SOON, PLEAASE!

Who! did you make up shiverin and their language by yourself? if you did i give you my utmost respect. its a pai9n to make up originao things. alot easier to take something and tweak it.
What happened? you havent updated in soo long. please update! your story's too good to abandon.

I love this story please update soon I really want to know what happens next. Excellent job.

hello good geniale kiss potter29

this is good...

great story
loved it
i'm really like thing the plotline
please if you could update soon
and keep up the good work

oh and i looked at the other web for the lemon, great job on it