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YuriFan5
2009-07-31 . chapter 8
What a twist! Ok, that sounds cliche, but really , I wasn't expecting Andersom to come back.
YuriFan5
2009-07-31 . chapter 4
Ooh, I like the poem! Did you come up with that? It's so chilling. I would like to say she is of the line of the Bride of Dracula, but I honestly can't say.
YuriFan5
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
Not bad, not bad at all. Most of it is very believable in the hellsing universe, with the minor exception of the whole Infamous(the video game) control-over-lightning power.
Hannahmgp
2009-04-15 . chapter 19
One of the reasons I love this story so much is that there's no sappy romance.
Other fanfictions:
Alucard: Oh Seras, I love you, my sugar honey bunny cuddlekins.
Seras: Oh, my sweet prince, I love you too. But wait, isn't this kind of OOC?
Alucard: What? Pf! No way! I'm ALWAYS this romantic and gooey.
Seras: Really? I never noticed.
Alucard: ... Um. whatever. Either way, I'm too blinded by my burning hot love for you to care what anyone thinks!
Seras: Yeah, this is kind of starting to creep me out.
Alucard: Shut up... I mean, uh, don't overwork that pretty little mouth of yours, my dear.
Seras: ... Can I go now?
Alucard: What? You mean you're not swayed by my good looks? But you always mention how handsome I am!
Seras: ... I do?
Alucard: Well, what about my great personality?
Seras: *snort*
Alucard: Screw this * uses hypnotism*
Seras: *blink blink* OH, ALUCARD! You're SO hunky!
Alucard: Much better. Now let's make out. Although I may not seem like it, I'm actually a total player.
Seras: Kiss me!
Alucard: Okay, this is getting a bit TOO creepy. CLOSE THIS DAMN REVIEW ALREADY!!
Me: Sheesh! OKay! Either way, your story is GREAT!! Two thumbs up! A MAGNIFICENT plot! It's not ridiculously confusing, like other ones where the author gets carried away. And it's also really well written! The only thing I have to say is this (Hey, what's a review without critisism?). The gap between Seras going out with Pip to Pip's death is weird. You can tell what happened, it's not confusing or anything, but more ... hm, unsatisfactory. Cuz I'm like, "Woah! Pip's dead? Did they go on another date?
Cause I haven't finished the series, so I'm in the dark.
WAHAHAHA!
DeeDovich
2008-12-09 . chapter 19
Fantastic merely genuis god i loved this story the complexity and finally Seras wasn't only a nervous girl but a true couragous fighter too what you dont see in the anime
You should write books and make movies about it later :)

-DeeDovich
Mistical Kat
2008-04-12 . chapter 19
Well this story was interesting. And you stayed as close to the manga-verse as you could. Well thanks for creating this story.
-Kat
Shade
2008-03-19 . chapter 19
Great story - keep it up!
Later
Kurosawa-san
2007-12-22 . chapter 19
you should write a sequel
Kurosawa-san
2007-12-21 . chapter 14
lol Alucard sounds jealous
Kurosawa-san
2007-12-20 . chapter 1
its good but there are a few spelling errors and dividers would help the transition between scenes.
oro4
2007-11-13 . chapter 19
very very very good! great story!! I loved it!!
silverXphoenix
2007-10-17 . chapter 19
This was such a good ending! It was such a twist from the originals...I really loved it. I don't know if you should do a sequel? But, I guess it would be interesting. It would actually be pretty neat if you did. I'd like to know what happened.
Anonymous Psychofan
2007-08-22 . chapter 19
Love it! It's one of my favorite Hellsing fanfics I've read so far! Everything was awesome- the plot, the characters... it was all great
Empathic Slytherin
2007-04-21 . chapter 19
joo better be damn well sure there will be a sequel! i love this story! so joo have a fan reader of gothmiko who is praying for a sequel!
*floors and phases into nothingness*
^.~ vegi
Empathic Slytherin
2007-04-21 . chapter 15
love it!
yeah! i totally love this story!
*floors*
good luck!
vegi ^.~
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