 YuriFan5 2009-07-31 . chapter 8What a twist! Ok, that sounds cliche, but really , I wasn't expecting Andersom to come back. |
 YuriFan5 2009-07-31 . chapter 4Ooh, I like the poem! Did you come up with that? It's so chilling. I would like to say she is of the line of the Bride of Dracula, but I honestly can't say. |
 YuriFan5 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Not bad, not bad at all. Most of it is very believable in the hellsing universe, with the minor exception of the whole Infamous(the video game) control-over-lightning power. |
 Hannahmgp 2009-04-15 . chapter 19One of the reasons I love this story so much is that there's no sappy romance.
Other fanfictions:
Alucard: Oh Seras, I love you, my sugar honey bunny cuddlekins.
Seras: Oh, my sweet prince, I love you too. But wait, isn't this kind of OOC?
Alucard: What? Pf! No way! I'm ALWAYS this romantic and gooey.
Seras: Really? I never noticed.
Alucard: ... Um. whatever. Either way, I'm too blinded by my burning hot love for you to care what anyone thinks!
Seras: Yeah, this is kind of starting to creep me out.
Alucard: Shut up... I mean, uh, don't overwork that pretty little mouth of yours, my dear.
Seras: ... Can I go now?
Alucard: What? You mean you're not swayed by my good looks? But you always mention how handsome I am!
Seras: ... I do?
Alucard: Well, what about my great personality?
Seras: *snort*
Alucard: Screw this * uses hypnotism*
Seras: *blink blink* OH, ALUCARD! You're SO hunky!
Alucard: Much better. Now let's make out. Although I may not seem like it, I'm actually a total player.
Seras: Kiss me!
Alucard: Okay, this is getting a bit TOO creepy. CLOSE THIS DAMN REVIEW ALREADY!!
Me: Sheesh! OKay! Either way, your story is GREAT!! Two thumbs up! A MAGNIFICENT plot! It's not ridiculously confusing, like other ones where the author gets carried away. And it's also really well written! The only thing I have to say is this (Hey, what's a review without critisism?). The gap between Seras going out with Pip to Pip's death is weird. You can tell what happened, it's not confusing or anything, but more ... hm, unsatisfactory. Cuz I'm like, "Woah! Pip's dead? Did they go on another date?
Cause I haven't finished the series, so I'm in the dark.
WAHAHAHA! |
 DeeDovich 2008-12-09 . chapter 19 Fantastic merely genuis god i loved this story the complexity and finally Seras wasn't only a nervous girl but a true couragous fighter too what you dont see in the anime
You should write books and make movies about it later :)
-DeeDovich |
 Mistical Kat 2008-04-12 . chapter 19Well this story was interesting. And you stayed as close to the manga-verse as you could. Well thanks for creating this story.
-Kat |
 Shade 2008-03-19 . chapter 19 Great story - keep it up!
Later |
 Kurosawa-san 2007-12-22 . chapter 19you should write a sequel |
 Kurosawa-san 2007-12-21 . chapter 14lol Alucard sounds jealous |
 Kurosawa-san 2007-12-20 . chapter 1its good but there are a few spelling errors and dividers would help the transition between scenes. |
 oro4 2007-11-13 . chapter 19 very very very good! great story!! I loved it!! |
 silverXphoenix 2007-10-17 . chapter 19This was such a good ending! It was such a twist from the originals...I really loved it. I don't know if you should do a sequel? But, I guess it would be interesting. It would actually be pretty neat if you did. I'd like to know what happened. |
 Anonymous Psychofan 2007-08-22 . chapter 19Love it! It's one of my favorite Hellsing fanfics I've read so far! Everything was awesome- the plot, the characters... it was all great |
 Empathic Slytherin 2007-04-21 . chapter 19joo better be damn well sure there will be a sequel! i love this story! so joo have a fan reader of gothmiko who is praying for a sequel!
*floors and phases into nothingness*
^.~ vegi |
 Empathic Slytherin 2007-04-21 . chapter 15love it!
yeah! i totally love this story!
*floors*
good luck!
vegi ^.~ |