what a wonderful last line!

“Sorry, it’s just that sometimes the beginnings of stories are so unpleasant that not even a happy ending can give you real peace. . .”

Wow. This was very good.

i couldn't help but laugh at the ending, your fic was great^^

well I had a lot of fun reading this. very nice twist to Snow White. I must agree with you. When I read the Jinchuu arc, I always thought that Enishi and Kaoru are so much more interesting together than Kenshin and Kaoru can ever be together. Then again, I always find canon pairings boring. Well good job.

Bleep!! Nice!!

I actually did really enjoy this fic, i tough i wasnt going to just by the name, i never liked snow white, BUT yeah really enjoyed it, liked that it was long, covered alot of parts without making it boring and had fun parts, rated for everyone and also showed a good part of us when we were lil kids.

Really glad that i read it anyways, hope u writte another great fic again, mail me if it is EK or BK.

Ja ne~

love the story

Nice fanfic, I though the entire war and how Enishi found Yumi(I'm guessing its her) and saved Kaoru was a little rushed. But I bet few people could come up with a better ending. Overall, this is an amazing fanfic, and I enjoyed reading this ^_^

Now, this is how Snow White should have gone. None of that, 'I'm a cute helpless Princess, and afraid of my own shadow.', kind of crap. It's kind of nice to see things like this. I can't help but love this version of the Prince better, as well. It's just so much fun to see a guy that's willing to get things done without a huge snit about morality.

Anyway, thank you very much for sharing this with us, this story was a great job all around, and an absolute joy to read. So, again, thank you. -Shink

EW! but sweet! lol. I really like it!

Oh! I hope Enishi & Kaoru wind up together in the end! Wait... DUH! If Kaoru is the one telling the story than of course they do! But if she's not, then they might or might not, but it will be good if they do whether or not Kaoru is the one telling the story, and hopefully she is so they will wind up together, but if she's not... ACK! I CONFUSED! I'll shut up, read, and find for myself now before I lose any more brain cells trying ATTEMDTING to think. aarghh...

GAH!! I ADORED THIS to bits!

This I *lovelovelove* this part:

“If you die,” he said sweetly, making damn sure his eyes didn’t dare leek right now and spoil things. “I’ll molest your corpse.”

That would sound so much like the type of concern Enishi would spurt out. He's so wonderfully possessive and jealous and disturbed and sexy... damn it woman, you fic has only made me more obsessed with Enishi!

Needless to say, that was definitely one of the best EK fics EVER!! Furthermore, I've come to the conclusion that you *need* to write more EnishiKaoru (fairytales would be nice... heck ANY AU's of the two)! Oh yes, really, you **must**

Anyway, I'll stop spouting my childish banter to say ARIGATOU for such an awesome fic!!

HOT... somehow, the words Enishi, sexy ripped nightgown, possessive, silk and Kaoru meshed together is... well... I think you get my point. Great chapter yet again! This has got to be one of my favorite EK AU fics!

INTENSE moment between Enishi and Kaoru... I was practically drooling... practically.

**Fans self frantically**

This.is.getting.so.so.very.good! Wah! Enishi is being so like his sexily enigmatic and smug self that all I can do is swoon. I love the EK interaction! You should really do more EK fics (no pressure **cough** nope none at all...) because you're great at it!

Onto 5...