Reviews for Power of Denial

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cRaZyMaN676 2008-07-06 ch 8,	abusesigh what is it with us fiction-writers that makes us just quit writing in the middle of a promising fic, eh? SP: hey, you ain't got not room to talk, your fics ares good as dead. hey! I'm tryin to update, kay?! my ideas just don't make sense, and when they do, they be buzzkills. SP: whateva. ANYWAY, why did you stop wrting this fic? you may have hated this chapter title, but come on! what are you, dead? live, but just don't care anymore? what?! if your alive and are still able to update, please do so.
Butterfree 2008-03-02 ch 8,	abuselol, well the chapter was still very nice even though the title of it could've been more creative ^^; The last two lines was also another very clever plot twist, and like before, it's good to know how Rage actually is like when she's not taking over Raven's body. Timid having Raven's common sense actually makes sense, since even though timid means shy, it also means hesitant. And being hesitant can lead a person to think more progressively then someone who isn't. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree 2008-03-02 ch 7,	abuseOh man, I just love your story, you know that? ^^ ((Too bad there's only one more chapter that's been updated though ^^; )) Great creativity with expressing how you thought some of the other emotions that didn't have much screentime in the actual show might've acted. I espeically love how you've expressed Rage, her 'I'm evil but there's only room for one evil in this body and that's me' attitude is quite believable. It was a little depressing how Starfire practically wanted Robin to feel sorry for her in this chapter, but I guess it's just in her character. Her naive personality can make her seem a little more blunt then she should be sometimes I guess. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree 2008-03-02 ch 6,	abuseI didn't lose interest for a second, good job on keeping your readers interested ^^ There are a couple grammer mistakes that make some of the scentences confusing and a little hard to read at times, maybe you should read over your work to edit it a little to make sure it makes sense. Either that, or it's just me that can't understand some of them ^^; ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree 2008-03-02 ch 5,	abuseGreat chapter!! ^^ Once again, you have a very progressed plot going on inside of Raven's mind, which I think is a very important concept for the plot you chose for the whole story; it's definetly something that makes it unique. ((Wasn't Beastboy's door broken before though? ^^; )) ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree 2008-03-02 ch 4,	abuseI definetly love your ability to create such a complex plotline within Raven's mind, your theory of Raven's mind really working that was could very well be true. I also liked how in character you have Robin be, he did figure out in the episode with the Wicked Scary that it was Raven hours before any of the other Titans could, so it's the same in this situation. I too when I first read the first coupel of paragraphs that Timid wouldn't really take pleasure in torturing anyone, that also added an interesting plot twist for the future. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree 2008-03-02 ch 3,	abuseAnd I don't blame you for enjoying writting this XD The thought of Raven trying to pull duck tape that's taping BeastBoy with hearts floating on his head and hearts painted on his uniform to the wall is jsut so hilarious, I can't even explain it XD ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree 2008-03-02 ch 2,	abuseLOL, this chapter definelty made me laugh XD If Teen Titans wasn't cancelled and they decided to have an episode with Raven learning to stop denying her feelings, I can actually imagine that this would be similiar to part of the approach they would take XD This one did kind of lack the feeling of longness unliek the last one though, but it's still cool. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Butterfree 2008-03-02 ch 1,	abuseYou're definetly off to a really great start there, I can just sense the awesomeness of this story ^^ The ending was kind of confusing for me though, but I guess that would be cleared up in the next chapter. Once again, you have the amazing ability to make a chapter a lot shorter then it seems(which is good). Most chapters of other stories I read that give me the feeling that so many events happened, are usually much longer. Having it like years really is just the perfect kind of length. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
Rocketeer 2008-02-13 ch 8, anon.	abusevery funny story. are you almost finish with it. what happens next. where did speedy/cupbid go? did he go get jinx, or bee or both. where did beastboy go. update soon. this is a good story
reader 2007-11-28 ch 8, anon.	abusegreat story. can't wait for what happens next
Raven'sDarkSide 2007-10-18 ch 8,	abuseThis is Raven's Raine, Raven's Dark Side's sister. Anyway, great story, please continue. By the way, I like this title, I can understand the "Growing Numbers" thing. I also like the hearts that float around Beast Boy's head. Needless to say...FUNNY! My god, I was rolling on the floor laughing at all the things that happened to him.-wipes tear from eye- PLEASE CONTINUE. Tank you.
RabulaTasa 2007-10-03 ch 8,	abuseI find myself highly amused that Rage is calling Knowledge "four eyes." This has been a very intriguing story so far, and should you decide to continue your unfinished stories after Comatose, I look forward to reading more. -John
Talon 2007-09-01 ch 8, anon.	abusegood story you have here updaet soon
reader 2007-08-24 ch 8, anon.	abuseupdate soon this story is great what happens to beastboy next. does jinx and bee show up . does speedy return to normal.

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