|Reviews for Those White Eyes|
| rikki 4/14/12 . chapter 1
.,yow!,a wonderful review for a wonderful story by a wonderful oliveink!.,that is if you'd consider this blabbering a wonderful review. . . . .anyway..,great story!
| SavvyEnigma 7/19/11 . chapter 1
This isn't cheesy at all! *sob*
| Unknown cherry girl 5/30/11 . chapter 1
Well written I love your stories! Keep up the good work.
| yuushibari 5/14/11 . chapter 1
I like an oblivious Gai, and Neji's so-called "proposal" is sweet.
| Ally Garcia loves it 8/10/10 . chapter 1
it was very short very very short but you know what i liked it very much well keep rockin!
| xchirix 9/24/09 . chapter 1
OMG! This is so not cheesy young lady! *says this dramatically with air quotes*
IT IS AWESOME! Kyaa!
You are such a talented writer that I envy you now...
YOU ARE SO GOOD WITH ONE-SHOTS!
Neji said to Tenten to become part of his family...
AMAZING! A littla sad for Tenten though...:(
BUT AMAZING! :)
| misto-shadow 1/8/09 . chapter 1
E. - That was extremely cute, even if poor Tenten doesn't have parents. I luffles NejiTen, it is just about the greatest pairing in the world, next to MaxFang, of course. :D And I luff Neji's oh-so-adorable proposal, I do believe he would say that. XD Just something simple you know, but it would have some super amazing meaning behind it, like that. - Le sigh, your story was lovely. :) Fantastic job, mi amiga. And cheese, tis good sometimes, you know. -
| glass-pencil 7/23/08 . chapter 1
It was sad... Until the end. As intended, I'm sure. :)
But yeah. Kudos. I thought you did an amazing job.
| animeluver7 1/20/08 . chapter 1
i think it's so cute
| nun-yah 12/16/07 . chapter 1
OK I was going to chew you out before I read your note at the bottom. tenten and neji are a little harder to write about, try working your way up from ino and shika to naruto and hinata to sakura and sasuke and then to tenten and neji, otherwise it was very cheesy!
| dragonkyuubi101 10/29/06 . chapter 1
Yes, it vas a little bit cheesy but, NEJIXTENTEN PAIRING ROCKS! IT IS #1! WOT!
| WeaponsMistress 9/22/06 . chapter 1
This was cute1 So... nice...
| Complexity66 8/5/06 . chapter 1
aw, how ke-ute! n.n;; keep up the great work!
| Ao Ame 7/22/06 . chapter 1
hm...a little cheesy but i like it :D
| Edicius 7/18/06 . chapter 1
no no not cheesy at all!such a nice story...neji seems to be the only one that truly cares and listens to her..and gai and lee are just trying to be helpful but keeps INTERRUPTING -ahem- xD very nice story soo sweet but sad at beginning :[ NEJITEN FOREVVER!XD