Wah! you never made a chapter 2!

i love this story but what's up with Ash

MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!(MORE!MORE!) Have u got the message? Well done! Well then? Get writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thats all for now ! no moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Ooh continue this please!!! But do you think you could keep the rating at PG-13? Just wonderin'! ^_^

Hee hee, good story! Ash is actually acting a bit mature! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please post it soon!

more more more! But i think it needs more romance but still can't wait for chp. 2..hurry up and get it out! *Maura*

That was soo cool! COntinue!

AWESOME KEEP WRITING

Awwww man!! More please. I really want to know what happens. I'm totally hooked. i loved it! So please continue. Ja en for now!!!!

In the famous words of everyones favourite wannabe-Pokemon Master..........."WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Keep going!!!!!! and plz give Ash a haircut! Awesome story!!!!!

Wonderful work. You have a very smooth writing style. The ending was genius, too, a nice change from the usual "I love you, Ash" "I love you, Misty" finished. Please keep writing!

Aw, cute story!! Please continue!! Please, please, please!!!!! Or I'll come after you!!

I di really like it, please make next chapter soon.

OMG! this is SUCH a kool story!!!!! You GOTTA write more!!! OMG! this is just *to* kool! Misty and Ash stuck in a hotel room...hmm, there are some thoughts running through my head as to what might happen, and most have a fight in them(i'm not a sick peverted freak, ok!?) WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!