Yay! Excellent story. I always wondered what went on during those six hours. Thank you for sharing this!

that is one of the best stories i've read.I love it

I agree with the last part. That scene really shows how much he really cares for her. I really liked it, it's good to hear also what outsiders think. Specially Ranger's men that barely talk at all.
Good job!
- Sharly xx

I absolutely loved how you wrote Hal's POV. Spectacular writing. So in character, too.

I am looking forward to much more of your work. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Mag

This was really well done. Being an Evanovich fan myself, and particularly fond of this book, I know it inside and out. You didn't miss a trick. It lacks the humor of Steph's POV, which is probably why Janet prefers to write from that one, nevertheless it was spot-on for Hal and full of insight. I'm so glad I read it. Thank you

That is one of my favorite scenes in the whole series and I'm glad that you wrote it in the point of view of one of the Merry Men. It's nice to see Ranger's feelings come out, even just a little.

Nice story!

luv it!!

I love the way you did this! Totally unexpected yet it worked and worked really well. Thanks!

I love these types! :D Great job! It's outstanding!! :D
~Peanut16

I love Hal's point of view! You should finish it up through the end of the book. You did a great job writing!

it was fun to read what Hal thought about how Ranger acts with Stephanie. I thought you did a good job of conveying Hal's thoughts. Maybe now you could write Tank's POV!

Fabulous! I love the RangeMan offices and it's nice to read an alternative POV of what happened.

nice.

That was great! I love all of Ranger's men, they're great characters.