Wow, that was adorable, I loved how you wrote their thoughts and the bit about the stalking and the "D" word. I thought it was sweet and hilarious. I loved it, you know you really love a fanfic when you personally think it was way too short and that there should be a sequel and to be honest there are few fanfics out there I review unless I absolutly love them. So great job.

Peace,Love & Gsr

That made me smile. I can just imagine the events of the story and it's just too cute.

excellent!

everything was thought out greatly like all the stuff about the lion king!

great job ")

loved the story u should keep going.

I'll admit. I'm one of the ones who reads a ton of stories and hardly ever reviews. I was so impressed by your story. I LOVED the Lion King references. I laughed out loud at your joke about Rafiki. :) Absolutly beautiful. Keep writing!

A very cute story . . .I'm going to read the sequel now!

-Hannah

Superb! Sweet. And dare I say... cute! Going to start reading the sequel now...

I'd like to read what happens while their on a "date". Another fantastic story in the works. Great job.

This was a good fic. I liked it.

Jackie

Wow, this is really great. I laughed so hard about the "cute fingerprint"! OMG hahaha

Are you going to expand on this some more?

Best.

This is a great story. So sweet.

That was an awesome fic. Maggie was a cute little character and I love how Grissom nicknamed her Cricket. That was very sweet. Great job. (-)

me too me too! i wanna see what happens too! oh please don't let this be a one chapter fic! it is so good! please continue!

That was nice-a good fic and not too much angst!

Gris with Maggie was cute-I love how he finally

displayed his caring side with her and overcame the

his fear of letting someone in!

Great story-thanks!

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THIS IS SO GREAT