FC: wow you are fabulous. dark mind yet fabulous.

i remember now i reviewed as theKeybladegirl many months ago
Fern: *crossed arms* took ya long enough
FC: didn't we just argue over grammer?
Fern: weiliecht...
FC: in english
fern: maybe...
FC: O.O

nice very nice i like this one alot it is very good keep it up

diCE

i think it is more sora to riku but that's just me i have liked all urs so far and i can see improvment nice keep it up

DicE

Awh! Qwt! I love it!

Well yeah I like the poem but I HATE you for writing it! Your're so much better than me!

You have a really nice style and youre poems flow very naturally.

that was really good. seeya

cool. i does sorta sound like riku. poor riku-kun...well ihope you think up some more! seeya kitsune-chan!

(To last chapter) Bad Riku! NO BISCUT! (Or in this case, cookie) (NOW) Your right! Ella Enchanted is good! The movie is AWFUL compared to the book! I'm sitting in a hotel waiting for you to call me... You need to put Twinkle Twinkle up! Like the...
Twinkle twinkle
My heart fades away
One! I like that poem! I would write one like it if you would let me! And I have a poem that would go great at the end of this!

It is my fondest wish.
And it will be forever out of my reach
All hope is gone for me
But to you I do beseech

I ask that you do one thing
And this thing is all I ask
I ask you plead my case
And that you take off my mask

That’s all I ask of you
And the rest is up to court
The case is out of both our hands
It is theirs now left to sort

Well... At the time it seemed good!
Riku: You mess up everything.
Me: *Crys and runs into RKM* You see how mean your koi is to me?!?!?!?!?! THE NERVE OF THAT MEANIE HEAD!
RKM: *Shoves me off* Get off freak!
Riku: I'm getting angry! YOU WON'T LIKE ME WHEN I'M ANGRY!
Me: Eh, put a sock in it you meanie head!
Kurama: *Shoves a sock into Riku's mouth* There you go Ame!
Me: Thanks Rama! *Huggles Kurama* I wanted to bring my plushie down here but I couldn't! WAAH!

it was great!really really sweet!loved lots!!

WOW!NOW THAT WAS GREAT ,IT WAS FRICKIN' AWESOME KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!LOVED IT A BUNCH

yayness!! your awsome at poetry. ^_^ i hope you update on your other story too. seeya

I WANT MY COOKIE SUNDAY! GIMME MY CARBS! Oh and if any of you bums called "Review Readers" have seen the Foamy cartoons on IllWillPress then email me! I like them! Hehe! My favorite is the ammityville toaster! And the ever present immortal words of the day are "You bought a haunted toaster?!" BYE! AND EMAIL ME!

Oh Adara that was such a wonderful author randomness!*Heavy sarcasam* I know don't you all just want to dedicate chapters to me?!?!?!?!?!?! Oh thank you! Thank You! I promised I wouldn't cry *sniffs* I promissed... Ah what the hell *Crys* Okay that was a little random but... I BLAME SCHOOL! And the immortal words of the day are *drum rolls down a hill* "Boatman dance boatman sing! Boatman do most anything! Dance boatman DANCE!" TAYL8R!

aw poor riku don't starve him i still need to finish twisted so i can start his torture...
riku: >edges toward door<
anyway he safer with you for now...