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Nalanzu
2005-09-04
ch 10,
abuse::giggles:: Very cute ending. Fit perfectly. I was particularly amused at the comments about fate. And the final line was absolutely perfect. ^^
MzDany
2005-09-04
ch 10,
abuseAw, it's over :(
This was such a brilliant story; I loved every chapter.
The conversation between Eric and Wes by the beach is great. Just enough mix of humor and seriousness. I love the 'baby' dialogue.
And, as always, you have a total knack for writing those two. You give them so much more depth than the original writers of TF ever did!
So...it seems like we can look forward to a reverse situation in the sequel. Certain visitors, hm...
Don't wait too long with that (or any other TF fic you might have in mind). It's always such a treat to read a new story from you.
Thank you, btw, for the nice mention in the beginning :) *blushes fiercely*
Hugs from Dany
Funky In Fishnet
2005-09-04
ch 10,
abuseReally great ending. Understated but perfect for such an action-packed story. I loved how Eric leant Gaby his morpher and how Wes and Eric sat and talked together. U write TF so wonderfully, it inspires my own work. Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep it up :- )
robster72
2005-09-04
ch 10,
abuseI did like the ending, very funny! Also very good repartee about the baby (whether cynical or true I don't know!). It also looks like there might be a sequel in the running?
shirley chong
2005-09-03
ch 10, anon.
abuseomg, I loved the ending too much. great work. hope you will write a sequel, even if you don't like baby stories.
timeforce101
2005-09-03
ch 10,
abuseHm, let see what's to come Gaby is lost and stranded still with the quantum morpher and the eagle and Wes, Eric and Jen have to find her, or she has to find her way home. Good last ch, Jen sleeping for two, does that mean twins, the last conversation between Eric and Wes was really good, I can't wait for the sequel!!:)
Miss Lizzy Bennet
2005-09-03
ch 10,
abuseAw I love this!!was awesome, really awesome! Cute chapter, I really enjoyed the final with Eric and Wes 'cause you put their friendship very well and was exactly like them, ya know! you're really talented, your fics are so great and I enjoyed so much this one!

Was so cute the Eric's feeling about Gaby, and I'm glade he let her use his morpher! was sweet! and the last scene was funny!

I hope see more fics from you soon! ^_^
Giannola
2005-09-03
ch 10, anon.
abuseGreat chapter. And a nice happy ending after everything the three had been through. It was good to see that Wes and Eric made up, and nice that Eric let Gaby use his morpher for a little bit. Hope to see more in the near future.
Dagmar Buse
2005-09-03
ch 10,
abuse*snicker*

Good stuff! Love the ending, even though I could see it peeking over the horizon. :)

As for things to come ... lines 11/12 from the bottom? Do I get a cookie now? (I prefer chocolate/chocolate chip, btw!)
White Time Ranger
2005-09-03
ch 10, anon.
abuseAn excellent ending to an excellent story! Eric giving Gaby the morpher at the end was so cute!!

Good job, and i am awaiting your next story!

~Steph
MrQuinn
2005-09-02
ch 6,
abuseyou know, I never get sick of reading about doubles from different realities talking about the minor differences in their worlds. Its just weird. You know, the road not taken, what could have happened if not for this one small difference. Its good stuff, and you're using characters that everyone loves. This just keeps getting better.
MrQuinn
2005-09-02
ch 5,
abuseWow, yet another twist in the story. You sure know how to keep your readers guessing, don't you?
MrQuinn
2005-09-02
ch 4,
abuseI knew it! I knew Eric was going to stay. I'm willing to bet that Wes and Jen feel the same way and will stay too.
MrQuinn
2005-09-02
ch 3,
abuseso, it wasn't Time Force's fault that the wormhole thingie didn't work, its all Jen's fault. This really is getting interesting...
MrQuinn
2005-09-02
ch 2,
abuseFirst of all, let me say I'm sorry I am it took me so long to get to this fic. I enjoyed how this one ended. It looks like Time Force didn't really learn how to control the wormholes and now our heroes are lost again. Great job, this was a wonderful way of introducing your readers to the idea of parallel realities.
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