very awsome. i loved zell's rationalization of things, very amusing. plus, i love he fact that you didn't make him the idiot as he is most often portrayed. i love zell and i loved this short, so awsome work!

Great job! :D

Finally...a fic that doesn't have Zell bashing! I always liked Zell and it broke my heart to see him made fun of. Keep writing.

Sad but beautiful. A wonderful introspection of zell, a character who is all too often characterized as dumb. I love how he never quite understood the phrase until it came to pass. The last line sums him up perfectly. Love it!

Cool, love the descriptions. That isn't the end is it? I really wanna read more! Love your writing!