i loved it! keepwriting more stories

Awesome!! I loved how you had Zuko let her go, and the perfect motivation and cover-up for it, too! You have suceeded where so many writers have failed! Great job.

THATS HELLRAIOUS! yes i know i cant spell

Wow, that was a great episode! Wouldn't it be awesome if these could be turned into real episodes? :D

this is a great story.very believable too.keep up the good work!

You are a genius for writing this! It stays true to the show and you managed to reveal Zuko's soft side like we've seen before, and without strippig away his true character!

Excellent! This would make a great episode 14!

~Dracori

ops. I didn't really read the paragraphs before the story in chapter 16. sorry! may i suggest that you seperate your quotes? great story!

ha ha. I love this story... now I'm going on to the next ones. so yeah keep writing these I these are almost better than the t.v. show themselves. Anyway gotta go. Later. K15

OH. MY. GOODNESS.

This is...this is...ABSOLUTELY SUPERB. You are a masterful writer. I feel as though I'm reading an actual episode, such is the good characterization, the continuity, and *excellent* fight scenes. I...wow...I just don't have words to tell you how good this is. I sincerely hope you continue writing more fics, as they are truly fabulous.

:goes off to read Ep 15: