|Reviews for Crossing Lines|
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 11
GREAT CHAPTER! He need all the luck he can get.
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 10
GREAT CHAPTER! and the dogs of war are loose.
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 9
GREAT CHAPTER! Nice play with King Arthur.
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 8
GREAT CHAPTER! Many great grandfather is home.
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 7
GREAT CHAPTER! and the team are forming up.
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 6
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I love that superweapon.
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 5
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Poor Delenn, I would love to see her face.
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 4
GREAT CHAPTER! I bet on Yamato to win.
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 3
GREAT CHAPTER! Another planet killer! How many was build?
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 2
GREAT CHAPTER! I am looking forward to see how B-5 feel seeing a space battle.
| Jerry Unipeg 9/24/05 . chapter 1
| Freddo 7/14/05 . chapter 4
The story continues to grow and expand; wonderful job thus far. I see that you have Ivanova, Lochley, and Wildstar in a rather interesting situation as of this point. I can also see that the Yamato seems a bit...lost ;-). Great job at handling what will surely become quite a complex and messy situation.
| Freddo 7/11/05 . chapter 2
Good opening. It is a little confusing (for me, anyway) to follow the different timelines; but, then again, I only have a nodding familiarity with Babylon 5. But, as I have seen, great job on the Star Trek and the Yamato segments. Interesting how you tie all the different elements together. I have accepted this for my web page, and I will soon begin posting it as we have discussed. Good job.
| rankokunalpha1 7/4/05 . chapter 25
wow an excellent story so far cant wait for more!
| thecomputerroom 7/3/05 . chapter 25
Quit your griping, and let the man write.