GREAT CHAPTER! He need all the luck he can get.

GREAT CHAPTER! and the dogs of war are loose.

GREAT CHAPTER! Nice play with King Arthur.

GREAT CHAPTER! Many great grandfather is home.

GREAT CHAPTER! and the team are forming up.

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I love that superweapon.

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Poor Delenn, I would love to see her face.

GREAT CHAPTER! I bet on Yamato to win.

GREAT CHAPTER! Another planet killer! How many was build?

GREAT CHAPTER! I am looking forward to see how B-5 feel seeing a space battle.

Great start.

The story continues to grow and expand; wonderful job thus far. I see that you have Ivanova, Lochley, and Wildstar in a rather interesting situation as of this point. I can also see that the Yamato seems a bit...lost ;-). Great job at handling what will surely become quite a complex and messy situation.

Jason:

Good opening. It is a little confusing (for me, anyway) to follow the different timelines; but, then again, I only have a nodding familiarity with Babylon 5. But, as I have seen, great job on the Star Trek and the Yamato segments. Interesting how you tie all the different elements together. I have accepted this for my web page, and I will soon begin posting it as we have discussed. Good job.

wow an excellent story so far cant wait for more!

Quit your griping, and let the man write.