 Katatonia 2006-01-07 . chapter 15Perfect - as far as I know the voices of all four of the main characters was spot on...and the plot/everything else was simply fabulous! |
 ix-tab 2005-08-22 . chapter 15Ok, I must admit that when I saw the crossover, I was like, wha? How did that happen?
And then, I read and it was marvelous. Such brilliant characterisation, and plus, Eroica! My love for him knows no bounds. And Klaus. |
 fififaifofum 2005-07-03 . chapter 15Oh! I loved it! Loved it, loved it, loved it! It's very rare that someone has the strength to keep Klaus a hard-case for the entirety of a story. The Eroica characterizations were spot on. Between you and Sindeniirelle I can see that I really need to learn about the "Doctor Who" fandom.
The plot was interesting, and so was Jason. Definitely a character with depth. I think his conversations and scenes with Dorian were my favorite bits of the story. |
 Margaret Price 2005-07-03 . chapter 13I think you mean apostrophes. (I’m a nit picker, too.) Fixed. Note: should have been – we were getting shot at. |
 fififaifofum 2005-07-03 . chapter 13“Your welcome,” the Doctor replied happily. “What did I do?”
Sorry, I get really pedantic about commas. *laugh*
"You're"?
The next thing I knew, were in the Mediterranean getting shot at by the KGB.
"we're"? |
 Margaret Price 2005-07-03 . chapter 6Fixed. Thanks. |
 fififaifofum 2005-07-03 . chapter 6Great story! I'll post a better review when I finish reading it, but I just wanted to point out:
The Doctor told him and then looked over at Eroica, who was looking at the image in fascination. “It’s just like the view from my zeppelin,” he remarked.
“You’re what?”
Do you mean: "Your what?" |