that was so sad. i really enjoyed it, poeticaly depresingf as it was. i also like all your other stories, poignant as they are. keep up thte beautiful writing, and may your river of inspiration never go dry

Oh, this was so sad..!
Well, I don't know if anyone else thinks it was sad, for me a tiny little thing can make me cry when it's about 1 of my favorite couples.

As I've said, You're DIVINE, Bef, you write 53 with such feeling it's not real.

Keep writing, that makes my day.

Love, Cadoan

So pretty! It's so sad I love it!

"Touch me not... It's taboo."

This line pretty much sums up this story perfectly. Beautiful. The sense of emotional pain and longing is so intense, made all the more so by the fact that Sanzo and Gojyo are both *aware* of how the other feels, and they are unable to do anything about it. Sigh. I absolutely *adore* your mastery of angst. Your writing style, as usual, is lovely. Now, I really must get around to reading 'Longing 2' one of these days!

wow, just simply wow...

That was very beautifully written. Very nice. Sad ending though.. I was hoping they would get together in the end but.. it makes more sense the way you ended it.. with the way it was going.. (I think you know what I amd trying to say ^^;;)

nice.- 'nuff said. - ^_~
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This fic is so angsty and yet so romantic. Sanzo jealous of Kougyouko is just so cute. And I especially loved how Gojyo and Sanzo clearly are so in love with each other and yet they can't even say it to one another. I wish it could have ended with Gojyo and Sanzo admitting how much they love each other and them becoming lovers. But anyways it was such a good fic. Hope you write a sequel and more GojyoxSanzo fics.