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ThoseNiceJeans
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
Please please please update. I love this story, you're an amazing writer!
Artsy
2009-07-03 . chapter 15
It was short but it was awesome. Poor Wendy! (If that *was* Wendy, and not Ali. I'll find out later, I suppose. :D)
NyxPyxie
2009-06-24 . chapter 14
aww...it seems to me that Kenny and kyle like each other. I absolutely love how ur doing the story now with the new plot twists and development. I cant wait 4 the next chapter! :)
Artsy
2009-06-19 . chapter 14
Great chapter, as always!

Bad news first: This chapter had a lot of grammer mistakes, and sentences that didn't quite make sense. It sounds like the kind of chapter that was a lot of fun to write (it was certainly fun to read), so maybe you were just writing too fast to notice some of the mistakes.

Anyway, I loved the action here, and the subplot with Wendy. I also like how you implied some things without saying them strait out. I'm talking mainly about the part where Kenny's sword glistens in the sunlight, catching the beast's attention. As usual, can't wait for the next installment!
Bumblebee_grl04
2009-06-16 . chapter 13
Whew! what a long story, but it was well worth it! i luv k2, they're my otp =)

hey, I noticed that on the prologue it said three-tailed comet, and then it's two-tailed in the last chapter? was that a typo or something? plz update!
Artsy
2009-06-08 . chapter 13
I love that Damien's in the story now! And Ellen the succubus, that was awesome. I like the descriptions you gave of all these people.
Artsy
2008-12-21 . chapter 12
Pip was so cute! And so were Kyle and Kenny. I love Craig and Clyde's job. And I like that you're giving Christophe his accent now (I imagine him speaking with it even when it's not written.) I'm glad I have all of winter break to read your story. See you next chapter!
MagicallyInclined
2008-11-30 . chapter 11
What happened to Stan? He didn't die, right? And he'll eventually get his body back? I was kind of hoping that Kyle would have been captured once more so that he and Stan could form the same strong friendship as in the show.

Anyway, interesting story so far; I can't wait to read more.
Kk2
2008-11-24 . chapter 11
This is the best kyle and Kenny story that i read so far!! I am such an idiot for didn't come across it until now. Please update soon.
Artsy
2008-11-14 . chapter 11
I'll do bad news first: it could've done with one more proof read. "Does Kyle have some sort of power that Raul wanted", tense mix up.

Now the good news: another kick-** chapter! This one really got me excited for the rest of the story. Nice with that goblin's death. I was waiting for Gregory to show up, and this time it was even more fun than last, with the throne XD. I like the new plot twist at the end. (I love scheming queens in fantasy.) I'll be there to reveiw the next chapter!
Artsy
2008-10-25 . chapter 10
That battle was wicked! I don't think the ending was bad--it's just a chapter ending.
Artsy
2008-10-15 . chapter 9
SPOILER WARNING.
Yey, Kyle and Kenny's meeting is comming up! Cool chapter, like the rest of them. Looking forward to the next update! (But no need to rush.)
ChapeauVert
2008-10-14 . chapter 9
Yay! I'm glad you got this posted (: Awesome chapter.
Artsy
2008-09-13 . chapter 8
Wendy a nature preistes, I can totally see that! The ending confused me, but I guess it was supposed to. I'll be looking out for the next update. :)
Artsy
2008-09-13 . chapter 5
Don't worry about short chapters, it's better than chapters being too drawn out (caugh ERAGON!, which your story kicks the ** of). I like how Kyle's powers work, with the little spirits! Now that I think of it, you probably wanted to make the elve's powers different from the wizards, it was a good idea. I like how your chapters are paced so far. (I'll read the whole story either way though, don't worry.)
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