Aw man. You haven't updated this in years
and after reading it, I NEED to know what happens!

Awesome story! So much violence. Yay violence! What happened to the fairy though?

Please write more this is awsome so write more and thank you for doing so.

aw how cute joey/jou is a puppy dog ^_^ yays! keep going its good *glomps*

O! I think the nickname really angered Joey.

Considering Seto's past, I don't think he was out of character there. Everybody needs to let off steam.

Hello! I enjoyed this very much! ^.^ There are a few gramatical errors that stall the flow of the story, but altogether it's great! I can't wait to read more!

Haha. Has anyone ever told Seto that hes a biotch? To the nth degree. I swear hes an idiot. Your not going to get Jou by dukin' it out with him. Awesome as always 'cause your just that good!

Warning: Me have consumed too much candy. Beware of rambling reviewer! Take caution!
Wiee! New chapter! :D Whoo! And between this on and the other Death Note fic update, it wasn't so much time between them (plus you're in university now, right? O_o I wonder how you even have time to sit at the computer once I think about all the books you must have to read!)

Anyhow; haha! Seto's so sadistic, enjoying the fight with Jou! ^_^ The lonlieness part in the text gave it more depth in a snap of the fingers! (A positive thing, I assure you!) Sad, really. Poor Kaiba can't interact properly.

And the way he reacted when actually looking forward to see Jou was in character (he mustn't like feeling such a thing, I reckon :P)! *smacks you* Don't go saying he was OOC! Sure he engaged in a petty fight with Jounouchi, but I think you made it clear enough he was mighty frustrated that the "twerps" were stalking him (restraining order threats, anyone?), and seriously, Seto can't be mature all the time...! Actually, he's more immature than Jounouchi when you think about it! He's obsessed with a card for god's sake!!(Blue Eyes White Dragon jet, anyone?) That's the only part I tihnk YOU might think was OOC. The other parts fitted and weren't "eccentric" to his character. Chill dude!

*laughs* Haha, you even snuck in the phrase Raison d'être! ^_^ I'm making the phrase popular! Wohoo! Soon you'll see it in everyone's fics! (*coughs* or not.. O_o) Anyhow, thanks for mentioning my fic too! *throws confetti at you, even though that isn't really a nice thing to do since it could get into your eyes, so instead I'll give you...some of my candy! And coffe! Yeah! So stay awake and write some more! :D* Take care!
-GP

Oh Continue please!

I figured there was some connection with the "raison d'être" bit. I love that story too. This was a long update, but well worth it. Good job.

Please write more this is really good.

Continue!

When Joey smelt the vanilla and cinammon I thought, 'Yeah! He's at Kaiba's house!'

I was thinking that Seto got to Otogi and bashed him. Is Otogi at the door?

A good chapter! Seto's interested in Jou, and Jou's interested in Seto! :D (not romantically, but hey, this is a start! Besides, the whole love at first sight thingie people do is annoying).

Grammar-wise it was good. You had one word completely off though, at one time. You wrote defiantly instead of definitely. *shrugs* No biggie.

And Yuugi's friendship speeches are getting to Joey? After a few days? Wow...they work full speed here :P

You know ,you have quite an evil cliffie here! *pouts* What I think is, maybe Kaiba has a leash in his hand, to give to Yuugi? (but why would he do that? It's HIS puppy! :P) hehehe...

Can't wait to see the next one! And screw Fan Letters, update this one instead! Booyah!

cant wiat for the next chapter!