The ending was sad nut at the same time it was warm... that makes no since...but you are a very talented writter! Keep it up!

Interesting. I never would have suspected it this way.

Wow, very nice! I liked it, not only because of LURVE Evanescence and I love Sakaki/Doujima (as you may well know). You also did a very good job. But I think it would've been better if Doujima shot herself to join Sakaki. I'm sick and twisted like that. ^-^ But it was good. I liked it. Good job!

cant remember if the kiss was originally in here. damn.
well, still a good fic, so why the hell did someone delete? (attempts to locate and burn the culprit, but fails miserably)

maybe you should have added some other effects to hellfire? (like i did mine. it appears near the end of my songfic)

and, ill say it again so anybody who reads this before they review doesnt criticize again about the pairing: open up your minds.

Ok i like S/D together, and Sakaki as a witch. any way keep it as a one shot.