That was so beautiful and rather depressing. I cried. Thank you for writing this.

Beautiful in a shivery kind of way. Good work.

Phantom Jedi

Whoa. That was rough. Loved it, epecially the end. Dynamite.

Chilling, heartbreaking and nicely written.

How sad...You've got me deeply moved by this story. Very, very, deeply. My heart is aching now. Aching for the loss of Luke, the once great Jedi. A tragic end to a very tragic life.

That was really sad, but well written by a talented author.

Regards,

Ari

that was sad. but it was nice to see vader live through the whole death star thing. and it wouldve probably been easier for the alliance if they had vader's help after the death star. he d stop other uprisings of other imperials, almost for certain. kudos!

-crazytook

That was really sad, but maybe it's just me (I am known to be overemotional at times! LOL). And I just love the way you write! :)