I liked it and I thought that it was well written but I didn't quite understand what was going on. Please email me and explain what you meant. I'd love to hear it.

Again, truly beuatiful writing and imagery! Very intense and effective!

You drew parallels between Jace and Brin I hadn't noticed before. They're two sides of the same coin. Your take on these two characters is intriguing; they both end up freely choosing to be where they say they don't want to be. I enjoyed this piece.