God, this is one of the most beautifully haunting & profound stories I've ever read! I feel awe, horror, sickness, sadness & a whole other kaleidiscope of emotion being so empathically evoked in me! Your writing skills are brilliant & in a class of it's own!

Awesome story, but what was the thing, a bear, something off the X-files? Talk about confusing. But great idea and action scenes.

VERY CONFUSING...

Oh my g*d! That was good. Keep writing.

I love your story. Please continue writing fan fic!